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http://yiffstar.com/index.yiff?pid=20492
Well, I'm not usually into the digimon sex, but my, my was that ever a well-written eroticisim. The reserch you've put into Amadillo genitiles is impressive, indeed, as well as the effort put into reserching Japanese food. I certainly didn't know what a dago was until then. It wasn't always clear what position they were in, but it's always hard to emphisise that kind of thing through the medium of words. On occasion I've thought about including diagrams. I spotted only three spelling mistakes (mistelling of "thigh", missed an "ed" off something that should have been in past tence and some other word, too), but that didn't detract from my enjoyment of an imaginative and brilliently discribed peice. Highly recommended for those up for a gay yiff.