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I have two ideas for a fanfic series but I want to focus on just one (digimon related anyway). So, as digimon fans, which of the two would be more enjoyable. Or just less crappy.

Digimon Elite Tamers

5 years after Tamers ending (and the movie with Locomon), no permenant plan of sealing the Digi-world has been made, so a special police force was born to find, catch, and deport/delet any digimon without a human partner. Things were going fine until a bazzire type of digimon started appear globally. Emotionless, "jiāngshī" digimon that have limitless stamina and can access powers similar to the tamers card-slashs.
The story main leader is Suzie Wong, now at age 11, and a bit tomboyish. After a small series of seemly random events, she gains a new type of digivice and new partner. Yamaki, now the head of digi-police in Japan, called for the aid of Her, Takato and the others for help. But things goes wrong, as shortly afterwise, a group JDs damages their digivices with a virus that keeps them from digivolving. The only ones that can are Suzie, Ai, and Mako (how also gain new digivices and parnter (at least Ai, Mako gain full control of Impmon)). With the addition of two international tamers, the five of them have to solve the mystery of these attacks, their new powers and save the world.

The twist to this is that only the older kids have card-slashing. Those with new-type digivices have the power to fuse with their partners for a time. Ex: Takato+Guilmon=A red skinned Takato with claws and flame-breath. Takato+Growlmon=A slightly smaller, more humanoid Growlmon with enhanced strength. It's not a evolvation, but more like a mode-change. The skills and knowledge of the tamer being used by digimon and visavera.


Digimon Legends Takato

In a world where digimon are not just real, but really close to killing you without your knowledge, a secret group. choosing by fate to guard the EArth from digimon that escape from computer-systems. They call themselves Legends. This is the tale of one of those legends. Takato Matsuki from Japan. On the night of his 11th birthday. Takato noticed a star that justed seemed to land by his feet. The 'star' turned out to be a defult-model digivice. The following day, he was talked to by two strange teenages. A pink-haired girl and a brown-skin boy. Using a common TV, they transported him to a gleeming city in the Digiworld. There, they scanned his DNA and converts it into his own digimon, Guilmon. And his digivice morphs into a portal-gaming system.
From there is meets two others from the same area, Henry &Terriermon and Rika & Renamon. Each is amazed to discover a personal power. Although Henry's radar sense and Rika digi-card powers were straight-foreward, Takato couldn't even being to understand his powers.
Each of the three was even a mentor, while Henry and Rika seemed to gain decent ones, Takato had the black-american boy from eariler, who was very much against it. Aided by his partner, Bearmon, the american boy, (with the power of forming throwing-knives, and is digivice is in the form of a watch) is training him to be a Legend.
So poor Takato has to protect the world, raise a dino, deal with a couple of nuts, and still be sane enough to reach 12.

It's kinda of a mixing of all the series, as the Pinkgirl is Mimi, and same of the other mentors are Yolei, Masaru, and Akira(from DW2). Each with a special power and digivice.


Both are PG-13, for laugage, volence, and minor sexual moments (if Adventures can have 3 bath scenes then I'm have 5 and "birds/bees" talk). Please leave comments that are more then 3 words.

Both seem pretty good if you ask me, so I'd say go for it...although I think this should go to the Den of Inspiration...but who am I to choose where this goes? Anyway like I said, go for it.

I like the first idea more, as I like to stick to canon: Suzie already has a digimon, now, doesn't she? So don't change it. Fanfiction should be as close to the series as possible. People otherwise have to get used to a whole new canon.

Belongs in Author's Domain, D-PAW, or The Den of Insperation.

Done and done. Now someone delete the other topic.

Quote:I like the first idea more, as I like to stick to canon: Suzie already has a digimon, now, doesn't she? So don't change it. Fanfiction should be as close to the series as possible. People otherwise have to get used to a whole new canon.

I understand what you mean. But I am/was planning on given have Suize a new partner 'cause a tradical part of digimon is the leader/googlehead has a dragon-type monster. Whether I do Elite-Tamers or not (because I still can't decide), I have the team balanced. I don't know. :(

Dragon, dino, or fire. That's what the gogglehead has.

All of which Lopmon is not. He/she isn't even much of a fighter. I can't, seriously of their fusing form. It'll be too damn close to this:



The idea of fusing Suzie and Lopmon is too close to Pokemon's fuse of Lopmon and Renamon(AKA Mimiroppu).

That second part is correct. It has the fapping F-fans of renamon and it's a rabbit. But I think it'd be like this. http://www.thedigiport.com/dex_Dianamon.shtml
Or one of the forms.

*whistles the Gundam Wing theme* Although the new partner was going to have a evovlotion series of 'weapon-users', I never thought of any of the forms being so pointy. Or so shiny. But I might just use the Lunamon series at some point.

Okay, not to be a pest or anything, but I need some sort of answer. From my standing, I can do either on the same level of "heart" that I can, but it doesn't mean crud if I can't decide which is better.

All I need is just one (more) person to say which is better/worst than the others. I'll even take suggestion on plot changes. This is harder problem is harder than is seems, so please help.