I'm just letting everyone know that I'm replacing all of the stories in my Death of Seasons: Shadow on the Sun Series with edited versions. I'm just taking out what little explicit sex I put into them, not because I'm for censorship, but because I feel that it detracts from my message. Per Sonimon's advice, I'm also taking out the song lyrics.
Hey, what ever you think is ok. I'll still read it.
The rewrites have been sent, and the next chapter in the story is also complete (though not yet submitted). I'm just waiting for the updates to start pouring in again.
My advice to anyone who enjoyed the Kazu/Hazy sex scene is to save it now as a word document, but I really don't think anyone cared.
I appreciate they way you wrote it since it's as done as well as the rest of the fic but I may not save it.
Finally you squelch the song lyrics!! Hazzah!