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Well i just finished my second drawing, and since i havent posted the first one here, thats up as well.
Note that, i am new at this sort of thing, and with some help maybe i could improve.

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*drools* Flameys....
THAT THAT THAT is the reason of live and flamy fans
Tia, Enix, many thanks ^.^
Well done, I definitely see improvement in the second picture. You've done the size scaling accurately and the detail is superb, and the lines are acceptable as well. The pose, hmm... it looks like he could be getting ready to attack something small, or just checking the ground beneath him, appropriate enough. The only thing that could have improving is shading, like where is the light shining, and maybe about his armour? And sorry to be picky, but his left foot seems a bit small (sorry), but that's okay, feet are positively hard to draw, especially when they're facing directly toward the POV.

You've truly shown the greatness of Flamedramon, great job

Ranking - 9/10

Which is: Excellent work
I definitely do like the second one. He looks really huge and powerful, something not many artists can get across. Plus, your style of colourisation looks cool.
Thank you kindly Urban, and Stormy.

Stormy your critique is very helpfull, the light is very general, and off in many areas
I really like those. They are pretty well done for a beginner artist (which you claim to be, that's why I say this). There are a few mistakes (which Stormy pointed out already), but it's still good. Can't wait to see more.
yeah, make more Flameys. ^^ And you are doing good on him. ^^
you got skills i like them i wish i could draw like that
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