Good page (although I don't understand Jap).
it's OK... but what's up with the gore, and Takato farting?
Lol, i didnt actually see the manga yet, but it looks kinda interesting, lol
It's deffinitly a change in pace...but a good find none the less.
I'm sneaking little peaks at pages of it...You know...My parents are home...And I usually only look at hentai/doujins when they're not home...So it's like trying to shop lift...You can't jack the whole store in one go...LOL...Hey I just made up a saying...Errr...That IS original right??...Cause if it is...I have just copyrighted it...
And what is with Takato/Renamon hybrid thing??...I'll keep editing this commentary as I read the doujin...Heh...
The part about Takato farting!?...W...T...F...
And those other characters that I knew nothing about sure sucked...
lol, the farting part is really weird :? as for the rest of it, i think it's quite good :D
Every once in a while I'll come across something that will give me cause to think, "where did I go wrong?"
This is one of those times.