Chapter1 - "When worlds Collide" by Vagrant Master

Disclamer Stuff:
Those who don't care, go ahead and scroll down. Those who do care - Get a life! Or at lease get out of here cuz if yer offended by an adult theme being applied to a cartoon then it's not a good idea to continue reading - go find a site that sells floral dresses or something!
I don't own Digimon, or anything to do with them, I'm just writing about them - OK!

Well, then - for those who wish to get down to the story, Enjoy!


Darkness had set in the Digital world. But it was not the darkness of night, it was the darkness of absolute Evil - More evil even than Apocalamon, many times more so.
This darkness was all encompassing, surrounding, suffocating.
No Digimon dared put one foot in front of the other for fear of meeting an unpleasant fate.
Many pairs of eyes sparkled in the darkness though!
Gatomon's among them. She had been standing on all fours at the side of a river waiting and watching for fish to eat, quietly humming her song to herself.
It had been four weeks now, since they had defeated Apocalamon, four weeks since the Digi-Destined had returned to their own world, all be it regretfully, to finish their summer vacation and continue their 'normal' lives.
Now, in the absolute darkness, Gatomon stood. Not being able to see her surroundings meant she received a sharp bang on the head courtesy of the branch of a tree overhanging the river.
"Ouch!"
Gatomon brought a gloved hand to her head and rubbed the sore patch.
"You know, you should watch where you're standing"
Gatomon whirled round at the sound of the voice, catching another blow from a branch.
"Ouch! W - Who's there?" She enquired of the darkness.
"It's me - Cherrymon" the voice was deep and rumbling.
"CHERRYMON! Stay away form me!"
Gatomon turned, ducked and ran, with all the strength in her small feline body.
But in this darkness, there was not enough light even for her to see with her heightened feline senses, and it wasn't long before she tripped on a tree root and toppled head over heals straight in to the river.
Gatomon's deep blue eyes filled with terror and tears, yet as fast as they were formed, they were washed away by the current of the river as she was swept down stream.
"Help *Cough* Please, Someone, Anyone HELP ME!"
The next thing she knew, she felt something wrap around her ankle and hoist her from the water before depositing her gently on the bank.
"*Cough* Thank you, whoever you are. You saved me"
"Any Time"
Gatomon gasped as fresh terror filled her heart.
"Cherrymon!" New tears welled up in Gatomon's eyes.
"The one and only!"

Meanwhile, somewhere deep in the forest, Palamon stood rooted to the spot.
Her big eyes were useless in this absolute darkness, so she closed them and listened. In the distance, she heard a loud exclamation followed by a splash then a yell for help.
"Humm, was that Gatomon? I thought she was staying at Primary village"
Palamon extended her vines and used them to find a safe route through the thick trees.
It seamed like she was walking for ages, especially since every few steps she had to duck under a branch or navigate around a big tree whilst still going in the same direction. She eventually found water, but the yells had stopped.
"Gatomon! Are you there?"

Gomamon dived. Nothing he hadn't done before, but this time he was on a challenge.
How deep could he go and for how long.
He dove for what seamed like hours when suddenly his head met a sharp connection with a rock falling to the bottom of the river.
'Ouch' Gomamon thought as he watched the rock continue it's speedy, if rather undignified decent, swirling in the underwater eddies.
He looked up, trying to see the source of the rock. He saw a shadow reaching across the water. Wanting a confrontation with whoever was responsible for nearly killing him, he started skyward.
Suddenly, everything turned to blackness. Gomamon panicked for a second, wondering if he'd been hit by another rock, but soon realised that if he had he'd not only no longer be thinking, but also have a sever pain in his head. So, he kept swimming up. He was beginning to feel the affects of oxygen starvation and needed air soon.

Palamon still had her eyes closed and was listening intently to the darkness. All she could hear was the whistling of the wind through branches and the sound of running water from the river. Then another sound began in front of her. The sound of bubbles breaking the surface of the water. She turned her head towards the noise and opened her eyes in a vain attempt to see what was coming. What if it was Seadramon, re-born and come to take revenge for his deletion. She stood stock still for long moments before something broke the surface of the water panting heavily. "All right" Said the something "Who's the Jerk!"

"Please, please Cherrymon, *sniff*, please don't hurt me!"
Gatomon broke down in floods of tears. Twice now, she had been caught off guard by the evil digimon. And this time she did not have the strength to run.
"Now now Gatomon, calm yourself. Dry your tears, I'm not going to hurt you. If I wanted you deleted, I'd have let you drown."
Gatomon sniffed, her breathing was still choked, but she dried her eyes and attempted to take controll of her body again.
"Well, thank -, *sniff*, Thank you for saving me".
Gatomon wiped her eyes with the back of her gloved paw.
"That's alright . . . I couldn't just leave you to drown now, could I".
Gatomon had gotten controll of her breathing again now.
"Last time we met, you tried to kill us all".
Cherrymon laughed.
"Ha ha, that was before I was re-born, it's truly a liberating experience, you get to understand the true meaning of life, that's why I saved you"
"Well, thankyou Cherrymon." She paused for a minute. " You don't know what caused this darkness do you?"
Cherrymon took a deep breath and sighed.
"Well, no Gatomon, I'm as much in the dark about this as you are"
Gatomon managed a laugh at the joke.
"That's better, maby all we need to do is find the switch!"
Gatomon tried looking around.
"Humm, Maby".

"GOMAMON!!"
"Palamon?! What are you doing throwing rocks in to the river!? You nearly deleted me!"
"I wasn't, or at least I didn't mean to. I must have kicked a loose one in to the water by mistake, sorry!"
"Well, I guess that's ok, but you gotta' be careful!"
"Hey, I said I'm sorry!" She paused for a moment. "I'm glad you're ok".
Gomamon swam towards the bank and hauled himself out, dripping wet.
"Ha! it'd take more than a rock to get rid of me, Palamon!"
They both giggled, glad that the other was ok.
Gomamon looked in the direction of Palamon.
"So tell me, what's with the lights?"
Palamon sat down.
"I have no idea. I was just in the forrest, minding my own business, when suddnely all the lights . . ." she struggled for the right words. "Weren't!" She finished off.
Gomamon thought for a moment.
"And then what?"
"Then, I started running towards the river, I thought I heard Gatomon calling for help."
Gomamon looked up.
"But I thought she was staying back at primary village!"
"Yeah, me too!"
Gomamon started.
"Hey, wait a second. You got here AFTER it got dark?"
"yeah, why?"
"Because that rock hit me BEFORE it got dark, so it couldn't have been you!"
Palamon's face brightened.
"Oh, that makes me so happy!"
Gomamon looked astounded.
"What?! Because I got hit by a rock!"
"No silly, because it wasn't me!"
Palamon felt so relieved, It wasn't her that'd nearly killed Gomamon.
She reached out for Gomamon, found him in the darkness and wrapped her arms around his neck in a tight embrace. "I'm so Glad you're ok, Gomamon"
Gomamon was thoroughly taken aback, even more so when Palamon planted a big minty kiss on his cheek.
Gomamon Blushed heavily.
'Luckey it's dark', he thought, 'so she can't see me'.
He hadn't realised, but the pheromones coming from Palamon's hair had connected with his hormones and his digihood had started to poke out from it's pouch between his back flippers.
Without thinking, Gomamon turned his head and placed a kiss on Palamon's cheek in return.
He immediatly wished he hadn't and tried to pull away, but Palamon's arms held him in place.
"Thank you, Gomamon". She whispered in to his ear.
He was about to reply with, 'Gee, I'm sorry', But his words were blown away by Palamon's mouth encircling his own. He began to pull away, but soon relinquished his efforts and gave in to the moment.
Gomamon's heart was beating faster than ever before and adrenalin flooded his body and mind urging him to go on. He lifted one of his front flippers, then the other and tentativly placed them around Palamon's back. Palamon withdrew her mouth for a moment and whispered in his ear, "That's right, don't be afraid".
Comforted by her words, Gomamon embraced her fully. He could feel her heart beating against his chest in time with his own.
He gently released his grip and slid down a little way. His Digihood was fully erect now and began brushing the ground gently, firing off neurons up his body and releasing hormones in his brain. He could no longer hear anything appart from Palamon's breathing. He could feel her chest expand and contract as her shallow ghasps floated through the darkness.
Gomamon was kissing her neck now, all the time gently working his way down to her chest.
She gave a small ghasp of delight as he began stimulating her sensative breasts.
He worked his way down to her tummy and further, untill he was at her waist.
Palamon gave out a small squeek as her own body was assulted with pleasure, neurons fired up her spine and her mind filled with hormones, she imagined she could smell roses on the wind. She became dizzy and sank to the ground on her knees, Gomamon helped to guide her on to her back and he began licking all the way back up to her face, the fur on his chest and tummy was rubbing her inner thighs and between her legs, she shuddered with delight closing her eyes and giving in totally to Gomamon's tallents.
Gomamon, for his part was enjoying the taste of her skin beneath his rough tounge.
All the while he was working his magic, his member was rubbing the soft grass firing off the pleasure centers of his brain, taking his awareness to new heights. As he reached Palamon's chest, his member rubbed passed her feet and was soon rubbing between her thighs which drew back the loose skin covering exposing the sensative shaft beneath.
They both let out a ghasp as Gomamon's member bumped against Palamon's outer lips, he paused for a moment and looked down to where he knew Palamon lay beneath him, He felt her nod slowly whilst breathing shallowly with anticipation.
Gomamon needed no further encouragement, he eased forwards and gently incerted the head in to her lips. Gomamon's pre-cum and Palamon's minty juices flowed as one as he penitrated her fully to the hilt. On his way, he felt a small obstruction give way to his progress, as it did so Palamon shuddered and moaned with pleasure.
They both breathed shallower and faster as Gomamon began pumping, slowly at first then faster. His sack began to tighten between his back flippers in anticipation, a few more minutes of ever-increacing humping and Gomamon's sack twinged, His tail lifted in to the air and his back arched, and he expelled his seed in to Palamon. As it travelled from him, it stimulated his body from the inside, heating nerves he had never experianced before.
The hot explosion and sharp contractions of Gomamon's member set off Palamon's own climax, Her mind Filled with hormones, she screamed at the intence pleasure, her back arched and her breathing stopped for a moment as her own fluids ran as a river, mixing with Gomamon's seed and coating their thighs with the fruits of their labour.
Their breathing slowed now and Gomamon lowered himself down to Palamon's mouth, She responded, and soon they fell asleep in each other's arms, Gomamon's digihood still within her walls.

To be Continued . . .


Comments:
Well, that's the end of my first EVER Lemon! Woah! Well, if anyone would like to comment on that (I.E. Was it too long, too short, just right? etc . . .), suggest how I could improve my writing or just offer advice on the rest of this story, then please feel free to e-mail me at:
Disclamer Stuff:
Those who don't care, go ahead and scroll down. Those who do care - Get a life! Or at lease get out of here cuz if yer offended by an adult theme being applied to a cartoon then it's not a good idea to continue reading - go find a site that sells floral dresses or something!
I don't own Digimon, or anything to do with them, I'm just writing about them - OK!

Well, then - for those who wish to get down to the story, Enjoy!


Agumon was crouched to the floor with his ear to the ground. He had been hunting a small sand creature for an hour now, and when the darkness overtook the land he didn't notice for a good ten minutes. He was so focussed on listening out for the creature that he'd forced himself in to a trance-like state.
Finally, he heard a motion beneath the ground and he began moving only to trip over a rock in the darkness and shake himself awake.
"Huh? What happened, Who turned out the lights?!"
A Voice Piped up from somewhere infront of him.
"Ha ha ha, not so hot without yer sight are you - Surface Dweller!"
"Huh? Who said that?"
"You should know, you've been hunting me for over an hour"
Oh, Right"
Agumon shifted uncomfortably.
"So, what are you gonna do now, Huh? I'd like to see you try to catch me in this darkness, Ha ha ha!"
Agumon Huffed, Placing his hands on his hipps and rolling his eyes.
Suddenly, in the far distance Agumon heard a scream, a splash and then plantive cries for help.
"Huh?! What was that?" Agumon turned in the direction of the noises. 'That was Gatomon, surly', he thought to himself.
The little sand creature piped up mockingly in front of him.
"Humm, sounds like someone's in trouble at the river - I DO hope it's not one of your friends - You're not exactly in a position to help, now are you!"
Agumon snapped his head back towards the creature.
"Quieten down would you, I need to think"
"What about?", the creature mocked, "You got a friend in trouble and there aint squat you can do about it!"
Agumon was getting angry now, he turned towards the creature.
"Pepper Breath!"
The fire ball slammed to the ground a few feet from Agumon sending sand spraying in to his eyes.
"Owee!" Agumon tried rubbing the sand out of his eyes, but his claws made it difficult and he kept slitting the soft skin of his face.
"Ouch - Owe Ouch! Oh!"
Agumon sniffed miserably.
"Ha ha ha, now that's why WE don't have eyes".
The sand creature continued mocking Agumon in the darkness.
"Look, just leave me allone would you!"
Agumon was beginning to cry now, partly from the sand but mostly because he believd Gatomon may be dying close by and there was nothing he could do about it.
"Ah Geez, I hate to see a dumb animal cry"
Agumon sniffed, he was rappidly loosing the will to fight.
"Please", Agumon began, "P - Please, Help me".
"Ha! That's a good one. . . ME, Help YOU! The mon who was tracking me all day trying to eat me!"
Agumon got down on his knees.
"Please, I have to help Gatomon, Please!"
There was a pause.
"I'll do a deal with ya!"
Agumon's face brightened in the darkness.
"Anything!"
"Ok, from now on you gotta' leave us sand creatures allone! No more hunting, no more eating us - We got families too ya know!"
Agumon nodded vigerously.
"I Promise"
"Cross your heart and hope to die?"
"Cross my heart, I'll never hurt you or eat you again".
"Ok then - Follow the sound of my voice, I'll take you to yer friend".
"Thank you - Thank you so much"
The creature began to move and Agumon got up to follow.
"This way - Follow MEeeeeeee - Wwooooo Wooooo . . . "
Agumon set off after the voice.

Gatomon was mostly dry now, she was sitting between Cherrymon's roots licking herself all over getting her matted fur back in to place.
Cherrymon was shifting around uncomfortably. "You know Gatomon . . . You really are a beautiful Digimon, your fur is so soft . . ."
Gatomon stopped mid-lick, slightly shocked at the sentiment.
"Well . . . Thank you, Cherrymon . . ." she answered.
Cherrymon nervously cleared his throat.
"You see Gatomon . . ."
Gatomon cut him off mid-sentance.
"Ya' know Cherrymon, No offence but I don't really think we're compatable. I mean, you're a plant type digimon, I'm a cat type - Maby you could get together with Palamon - I . . . I guess I could help if you like . . "
"Mmmmm" Was all she got in reply.
Gatomon thought he sounded very hurt by her flat put-down.
"I'm sorry, Cherrymon, I . . . I guess you're just not my type".
"Ok Gatomon . . . I understand".
He lowered a branch and fondled her head and behind her ears affectionatly before withdrawing and letting her continue.
Gatomon purred softly, He was very gentle.
When he withdrew his branch, Gatomon felt a little guilty for making him feel bad, but went back to licking the fur of her thighs back in to place.
Minutes went by and nothing was said. Suddenly, Gatomon tenced pricking her ears.
Cherrymon felt her tencing.
"What is it Gatomon?"
"I . . . Hear . . . Something". Gatomon strained to hear the noise again.
She heard it and realised what it was.
"AGUMON!" She exclaimed excitedly, searching the blackness for her friend with her big blue eyes.
Soon, Cherrymon heard him too.
"Gatomon, are you there - I can't see you - are you ok?!"
Gatomon grinned as she stared in to the darkness.
"AGUMON - I'm here - I'm fine!"
Agumon's voice floated back to her.
"Gatomon! I can hear you - Keep talking so I can get to you!"
Gatomon called in to the darkness for the next minute before, eventually, Agumon crunched through some bushes in to Gatomon's clearing.
"Agumon, it's good to see you . . . Oh, well you know what I mean - he he"
"Sure do -"
Agumon moved towards her, his arms outstretched looking for obstructions. He soon found one, in the shape of Gatomon's chest.
Gatomon giggled.
"He he he, That tickles"
Agumon withdrew his claws quickly blushing a bright red.
"Gee, I'm sorry Gatom -"
He was cut off mid-sentance as a furry paw was placed on his scaly lips.
"Don't worry Agumon, it's dark - I understand"
Agumon shifted from one foot to the other.
"Thanks"
A slight pause ensued before Agumon cleared his throat.
"Umm, well, what do we do now?"
A small cackle rose up from the ground near Agumon's feet.
Gatomon screamed.
"Aaahhhh!!! Who's there!?"
The creature shifted position in the sand.
"Agumon's Ex-Lunch" it said simply.
"What?" Gatomon was unsure whether to be freaked, curious or scared.
Agumon stepped in quickly.
"umm, it's a long story"
"And it's about to get interesting". the creature piped up.
'HypnoVolt'
A Hard bold of electricity shot from between Agumon and Gatomon so powerful it lit up the clearing.
It struck Cherrymon squarly in the trunk. He screamed in agony for barly a second before all was scilent.
Gatomon spun on the spot the taste of static charge permiating the air.
"Cherrymon, Are you ok?"
Agumon was shocked.
"Cherrymon !!! What are you doing with HIM!?"
Gatomon turned to Agumon.
"No, he's changed since he became re-bourn, he's good!"
A cackle once again rose from their feet.
"What did you do to him!?" Gatomon yelled at the creature.
The creature cackled again.
"Why not turn round and see for yourself"
Gatomon suddenly realised that there was now just enough light to see by.
She turned round just in time to see a bunch of vines fly from Cherrymon's canopy. Gatomon tried dodging out the way, but was too slow and was caught off-guard.
The vines wrapped round her ancled, wrists and neck.
She cried out in pain as the vines tightened and began cutting into her soft flesh, even through her fur.
She tried to struggle, but each movement brought a fresh wave of pain as the vines tightened round her limbs.
Gatomon cried out as tears flowed freely from her big eyes.
Unable to stand the sight any longer, Agumon ran forward and gripped the vines entwining her left arm and tried to pull them appart. Instead, he felt them tighten even further causing Gatomon to cry out. even more fresh tears falling to the ground.
Agumon could see that the vines were now so tight that they were actually slicing through Gatomon's soft flesh. The fur round her wrists and ancles was beginning to turn read and matt with blood.
Agumon turned on the creature.
"Let her go, for the love of god, LET HER GO!"
The creature laughed at him, and for the first time he saw it properly. It looked like a foot long Grasshopper, Except that the whole body was a mouth, it had no visible eyes and it was perfictly silver. Agumon could see himself reflected in it's skin, the skin round his eyes was blooded where he had scratched them trying to get sand out of them earlier, his mouth was turned down at the sides in dismay and despair and his eyes were bloodshot as he tried to hold back tears of helplessness.
"What the hell are you?!" He exclaimed in a voice that was close to breaking.
"Ha ha ha! Hell IS what I am, or at least an ambasador"
"What!?" Exclaimed Agumon unable to take in this inforamtion. "Let Gatomon go NOW!"
"Ha ha ha, Oh come". It stated envitingly. "Arn't you up for some fun?" The creature grinned sadistically. "You'll like her FAR better this way, I Promise"
Agumon's eyes widened in shock.
"How DARE you! I would NEVER take advantage of Gatomon like THIS!"
The creature grinned showing many rows of rotting, decaying teeth, Black in places with putrifying flesh hanging off in tangy strands.
"We shall see". It said simply.
A look of confusion crossed Agumon's face before he heard Gatomon yelling at him, her own voice near to breaking. "Get out of here, Run while you still can!"
But she was too late. As Agumon took his first step, another vine shot out from Cherrymon's canopy and grabbed him round the mid-section, holding his arms tightly in to his side and lifting him off the floor.
The creature scuttled towards him and climbed up his front, it's razor sharp clawed feet digging through his tough scales as if they were butter.
"Leaving so soon, we were just about to start having fun wern't we"
The creature wheazed a laugh in to his face. The stench of rotting flesh caused a wave of naucia to flood over Agumon's sences before it jumped back off him slicing more flesh in the process.
'HypnoVolt"
It cried.
The bolt struck Agumon squarly in the chest.
"NOooooooo!" Catomon cried out, tears blurring her vision causing the world to become a stained-glass-window, ever changing.
Agumon screamed as he felt his flesh part and a searing heat pass through in to his body, wrap around his heart and fade just a quickly.
As the pain faded, Agumon felt like he was half-way between concious thought and a dead faint.
"What did you do to him!?" Gatomon wailed from her prone position.
"Brought him round to a new way of thinking, a way of pleasure, a way of Flesh. Haven't I Agumon"
The creature turned to face the digimon and Gatomon turned her head to follow it's sightless gaze.
Agumon's eyes had turned black like a shark, they looked dead.
He growled low and long.
"Heh heh heh, why don't we try out your new found desire, Agumon?"
Agumon needed no further encouragement, he lept towards Gatomon who let out a yelp of supprise and fear at seeing his eyes and the speed of his movements.
"Agumon?" she questioned the thing before her, it didn't seem to be Agunom in any other way than external appearance.
Agumon did not reply. Instead, he gripped Gatomon's knees viciously with his claws and pulled them appart with ease, exposing her still-damp thighs, the fur around her crotch was damp and matted, exposing her thin slit.
Gatomon ghasped in supprise and then shock as she realised that Agumon's member has unsheathed it's self and was already at it's full hardness. He was very big, she thought, Too big for her.
She was so nervouse. She started shaking, partly from the size of Agumon's throbing member but also because this would be her first time.
"Please, Agumon, Stop!"
Agumon just grinned, a cruel grin which curled his lips exposing his sharp teeth.
Without warning, he thrust forward rappidly entering Gatomon, tearing open her slit and painfully stealing her innocence.
Neither of them had had time to get 'excited' and the penetration caused Gatomon conciderable pain. She screamed at the top of her lungs and squirmed in agony and defialment, but her bonds held her tight.
Agumon's foreskin had been ripped back with the force of his thrust exposing the sensative tissue beneath.
The viciousness of his entry had caused him to rip away the coverings of Gatomon's innosence and she began to bleed, the blood mixed with her now accumulating juices and Agumon's pre-cum forming a pinky liquid which began dripping from her vagina.
Agumon's foreskin had also split and he was bleeding in to Gatomon's walls, yet he seamed oblivious as Gatomon continued screaming in pain.
Agumon gripped her tightly round the chest pressing his claws in to her flesh and cutting through in to her body, the blood flowed from between his fingers and dripped down to the floor mixing in with the juices dripping from Gatomon's vagina.
Agumon was in a world of puer sence. No flesh, only pleasure, growing with each exquisit thrust of his loins. He now began to pick up pace, thrusting in and out of Gatomon's slit at an incredible rate.
He was oblivious to her pain, intent only on maximising his own pleasure.
Although this was a humiliating and agonizing experience for Gatomon, she was now becoming numb to the pain, so much of it she was experiencing. She was also being well stimulated by Agumon's vigerously pumping member and she felt herself getting slick and tingly between her thighs.
She detested herself and hated Agumon, but she couldn't help her natural instincts from taking over and she felt her climax drawing near.
Agumon pumped for another thirty seconds before he spazmed, his nut-sack tightened and he ejaculated wad after wad of hot, creamy cum in to Gatomon's walls. He immediatly withdrew, satisfied for now and fell to the ground breathing heavily.
Gatomon's spine tingled as Agumon came, just a few more thrusts and she'd orgasm too, but then he withdrew leaving her cold, defiled and unsatisfied.
A sharp, grating cackle rose from the ground. "Well now my dear. That was entertaining. Shall we see if he enjoyed that?"
'HypnoVolt'
The bolt struck Agumon in the middle of the spine arching his back in muscle spazm.
He lay there for long moments.
"Ag . . . Agumon?" Gatomon shakily enquired.
Then, she heard him, he was sobbing hard.
He turned his head towards her, she saw his eyes were back to normal and filled with tears.
"Ga . . . Gat . . . Gatomon *Sob* I'm so S . . . Sorry". He began sobbing uncontrollably.
"Agumon, It wasn't . . ."
Gatomon didn't know what else to say.
"Ahh, Poor Baby. Didn't we have fun? I did!"
Agumon didn't move, he just sobbed.
"How about going again?"
Agumon caught his breath for a second.
"Don't you D . . . Dare!"
"Ha ha haaaa!"
'Hypno -"
"FISH POWER!"
Several powerful water jets caught the creature off-guard.
Gatomon and Agumon both looked round to see Gomamon swimming across the river to them with Palamon on his back and a river allive with fish all around them.
They got to the bank and Palamon lept off.
'Poison Ivy'
The vines shot towards the creature, but connected with air as it dissappeared in an ether of orange light, still cackling.

To be Continued . . .


Comments:
Well, that's the end of that chapter of this on-going lemon of mine.
This was a tough one to write for some reason - Only the Beginning bit with Agumon, the rest was ok. I guess I had writers block or some other excuse, but I got there in the end, even if it is a bit rough at the edges, or rather at the beginning:P
If anyone would like to comment on that, suggest how I could improve my writing or just offer advice on the rest of this story, then please feel free to e-mail me at: