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Need help with Jyou/Mimi/Micheal plot
#1
As Thunder Echoes has requested a lemon featuring Mimi getting on with both Jyou and Micheal at the same time, which has left me with a little problem:

How do I write this so it's not cliched nor plotless porn?

So far, the only idea is pretty much cliche, a game of strip poker. I'd prefer to do something more meaningful than that, but it's about the only way I'd see getting Jyou in a three-some and stay in character (assuming I can get him to agree to the game in the first place.)

Any thoughts will be appreciated.
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#2
That's why I chose it in the first place. Because it's difficult to get to that point while keeping them in-character.
If you aren't able to find a decent plot, you can always write a Jyou/Mimi/Michael triangle with a Jyou/Mimi or a Michael/Mimi lemon scene. I really don't mind.
On a side note; has Red chosen what he wants as a reward yet?
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#3
Red decided he wanted to be a character in Red D-Arc Diaries.
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#4
Arg... 2nd time typing this... stupid slow freezing comp! *kills comupter*

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Hm.. yeah maybe... *goes into insane late-at-night idea making mode*

Thats a tough one... I can only think of 1 thing that may work.. and I'm not even too sure if it's in character or not. But meh, it may help.

I think.. If Jyou went to visit Mimi in America (Because they had a relationship of some sort... I know one of your lemons had one of those) and then Micheal finds out and he gets jealous. Then somehow... (how oddly specific) Micheal and Jyou compete to see who is the best lover.. or something of that sort.

I hope that may help.. or spark some spin off idea.. or something. Well whatever.

*goes back to normal insane late-at-night mode*
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#5
It looks like I'll be doing the Jyou/Mimi/Micheal as Entry 20 of Red Digivice Diaries where it will be the strip poker game. The game will occur after a party in the Digital World with a few Chosen/Digidestined from around the world playing. I'm still hammering out the details and figuring out who is playing and whether or not the other players actually do anything once naked.

However, Mimi's past relationship with Michael will play a factor.

I haven't figured out is I'm going to use Mimi's perspective, Jyou's, or third person omniscient.
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