08-26-2010, 03:30 PM
(08-26-2010 01:13 PM)CloneWarrior Wrote: The third chapter of the manga just gave me a good idea.
It's not exactly my kinda thing, but...
It ends with Nene lounging on the beach in the Island Zone in a bikini...
And earlier in the chapter there was almost a catfight between Nene and Akari.
What if the onsen scene you're doing is a two-parter: one part mainly for the girls and the other mainly for the guys?
Part 1: Basically what you were already planning. Akari's feeling horny and decides to peak over at the boys' side. She fingers herself while the guys fool around.
Part 2: Nene shows up behind Akari in her bikini and makes a comment about how it's fun watching strong guys. Akari rages and attacks her, starting a nude cat fight which shreds off Nene's bikini and leaves them in a compromising position. Akari realizes Taiki, Zenjirou and Kiriha are staring at them.
Lol. We'll see. *cracks knuckles* But I can assure you it won't be colored anymore, but rather manga toned. (Been some time since my last grayscale manga stone.)
Light and Darkness, the balance for which is the Shadow--the perfect sphere of order. One cannot live without the other...