help on an idea

[grandphoenix1]

I have this real good idea for a story, though I write it down on paper, scripple some notes, but when it comes time to type it, I feel like it seems plain. I have an idea since late summer, that is a good dark story. It involves Lucemon(rookie), who is reborn after Frontiers, he wants his revenge and still persuing his great "utopia". When ever I write a certain scene, I would mark down a particlar song.

For example, in the begining I wrote down "Echoes-Pink Floyd" for the rebirth scene of Lucemon, when he awakes from an egg in the Dark Era. When ever I write something, I listen to music, which gets me an idea.

After the rebirth, I've included an O.C. who meets Lucemon. He is this boy-who is an anicent god-with a body of a human boy, who's name is Abraxas. Abraxas, when his god mode, is a great phoenix-BurningPhoenixmon(*catch my drift*). Abraxas joins forces with Lucemon, in his revenge scheme & utopian dream.

Right after this, I seem stuck, I get this "writer's block", which keeps fucking up and I'm unsure how to continue my story. Not sure, on how to include the Chosen Children(*legendary warriors). Can someone help me? Please?

[Yumi]

I have the same problem, I'm writing a story to.
So I usually read a book that I like and I try to get different ideas to help.
Or I could ask a friend to help you?

[Guilmon and a shotgun]

Yumi's made some good suggestions, but i will add my own take on how to include the Chosen Children (I'm assuming this means Digidestined).

So you have Lucemon and Abraxas who've joined forces in the aim to create a utopia, they're our Protangonists i'm assuming. So, to accomplish this goal they need to get rid of Digimon not suited for a utopia which includes Digimon with human partners.
The Chosen Children (Our Antagonists), whilst wandering through the Digital World (Backstory for why this is can be added depending on what season the Digidestined are from or if they are OCs too then one can simply be invented), are confronted with a scene where Digimon that are pure enough for Utopia are donning black uniform armor plating and destroying the Digimon that are impure in a small village.
The Chosen children fight them off and are now in the story, ready to fight alongside the impure Digimon against this purity-obsessed invasion.

Hope that helps, you don't have to use my version but even if you do it's not nessesary to use it word for word. Take bits you want and hopefully it'll help you complete your Saga.

[grandphoenix1]

Guilmon. You got the idea. Except, that one part about about the digimon dressed in black, that was a good suggestion. The ending battle, has the Legendary Warriors battle out against the two villians-Lucemon and BurningPhoenixmon, which has the one of one most badass battles ever, while I was writing it out I had stated that to myself.

The begining has the rebirth of Lucemon with "Echoes" by Pink Floyd herd throughout the abyss of the Dark Area

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uLJ_QVfT_wM

Throughout the saga, numerous musical bits are "herd" .

"Brain Damage/Eclipse"-Pink Floyd http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf-ArgakvZI

"Sympathy for the Devil"-Rolling Stones http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mM-VvLvmV6o

"Gimme Shelter"-Rolling Stones http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJMnES7WoT4

"Ibiza Bar"-Pink Floyd http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgH4ZVukIB0

"Us and Them"-Pink Floyd http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zlY-JlE5ZCo

"Breath/Speak"-Pink Floyd http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1fNlMpTD3k

"Greed"-Godsmack http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKTe3s-4meg

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[Guilmon and a shotgun]

Thanks, like i said anything from my suggestion can be used or snipped out, i don't really care i'm just happy to help ^^

Also, if you were thinking of compiling the story with some music, one way i can think of is to put ques for what song to play, when to play (what part of the song) and when to stop into your story so the reader can benefit from audio accompaniment whilst reading. It'd be very easy to do and readers have the choice of including music or not.

[grandphoenix1]

Thanks, like i said anything from my suggestion can be used or snipped out, i don't really care i'm just happy to help ^^

Also, if you were thinking of compiling the story with some music, one way i can think of is to put ques for what song to play, when to play (what part of the song) and when to stop into your story so the reader can benefit from audio accompaniment whilst reading. It'd be very easy to do and readers have the choice of including music or not.

That's the idea I had in mind, dude.