Sex scenes

[Zach attack]

Hey everyone.. Need a little help with something.


When writing a scene, I can do a damn good yaoi scene (probably because of the personal experience factor..) but when I try to write a straight or yuri scene.. It just doesn't work very well. Any advice?

[Rational passion]

This is a perfect example of why you should talk to your friends.

I've taken care of this for him already, so if a mod would like, they can lock this. Otherwise, somebody should ask more questions.