Life of Society
Life is great. Light flows with the night.
No different between night of day.
So fly away from this landfill of pain,
and land far away from this day.
People have their attitude and lies to bless it.
The yell and curse to be affected.
No matter how much they try. They die inside.
So they are blind when we can see this land slide.
Government officials trying to get things back in tact.
While in the end they click in saying "Fall to the wall."
We rely on other people. I say no Deal with it your self.
All the above said and done. It just sells us some.
It tells us we are off task so mask the fact.
You lived in fear so stand up and bluff all you want.
and say good-bye to those lies.
Because i am tired of it.
~Ill post more when i can~
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This is a great example of poetry, Ryan. Great job!! ^^ It has a certain simplicity which allows the reader to wrap their mind around the main concept. I can easily find truth in this poem and can hypothesize as to what parts relate directly with what real life aspects exist today. There are no enigmatic meanings--I feel as if this is to tell people exactly what's wrong. You didn't add any hope to this piece, which is good in this case, because I'm guessing you want people to feel the emotional intensity of how severely messed up and deluded society is. Excellent work =3 I'm looking forward to more ^^
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I didn't think Ryan could write poetry better than a monkey, but he did really well on this, so great job on proving me wrong Ryan! :D
Mreeeow!~
The Cheaters Lie
Lenny and Marie sitting in a tree
K.I.S.S.I.N.G. That tree was about to be me
But that same day it wasn't me
So then that tree fell on me Then i said "Couldn't be"
All the five,that lied and died
Killed me inside aside of all this.
I hated it. So i slayed it.
The beast of all small, dull, and bald
The greatest of soilders cry but it dont fly
The pitiful but bashful cruelness
All the blood draining it all the sound's enclosed it.
We put pain to the game. Making us insane.
Your once lustful kiss which was a bliss was never missed.
Till now as the rain drops by, making me cry
I am now alone because of you seeing it through.
So be damned to hell like the serpents bell.
Marie your lies have gotten you no where
I'm somewhere farther than you
Fighting back all natural fears
All i need is to be clear.
All you ass holes who live out there
Listen up and let's be clear
Life isn't ashamed. Learn to love and love to live.
Now begone Shaun, dawn, lawn burst into flames!
Because your in misery.
Faithful but yet forgotten.
So when the day rises, we see the prices
No gold, No jewelry, no lies, no size.
All of the stuff that catches the eye is a lie.
Looks are fake but the prizes are not.
I can write, spite all causes of anger
Scream and yell like a rung bell
I will stand and laugh at this blood bath
The anger is funny a bunny. So stop crying.
So let me tell you something. Your dead.
Stop acting immature and endure
You cry over this bull crap lie
The plague me to die. But i still laugh.
False is failure. Cant be what i see,
You meet to me lieing to see
But your teeth are venom of the rhythm.
So fuck off and stay off of the lie.
Remember the moon lit sky?
You burned it with your lies.
Angry you are. But moronic as a slut.
Now keep your mouth shut.
[chorus]
You cry to sigh but let god take you peacefully. Now let out your cry for hell. As the barb wire splits you in half. Death is to good for you. Now your blue with berry. Now die as a buy.
