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this one took about 4 weeks of continous redrafting

I always thought my mom was a pretty good looking woman just comparing her to
her friends and other women that I knew but I never thought about her in a
sexual way, even a little bit until an incidence that happened last year.

I was out on a date on Friday night, with my girlfriend kari. We'd been going
out for awhile but it seemed to me that she was about to dump me, but in the
meantime I was going to make the best of it. We'd gone out to a movie that night
and we'd come back to my house for awhile.

We were sitting out on the porch, sitting in the swing, just rocking back and
forth and talking. kari seemed to be in a pretty good mood for a change, all
the beer we'd snuck into the movies probably had a little to do with it.

As we sat there, I put my arm around her, and I was slowly moving my hand down
her arm, inching ever so close to her breasts. She never had any real sex with
me, but a couple of times she'd let me stick my hand down her dress and feel her
up, and one time she'd even played with my cock through my pants.

But tonight kari was leaning real close, with her hand laying on my thigh,
maybe it was my imagination but I thought her hand was creeping up my leg. If it
was my imagination, I was sure enjoying it. I slid my hand down around kari's
waist and started to stroke her side and pull her closer and closer. I was a
little drunk myself, because I felt myself getting bolder than I would've
imagined.

I brought my hand up and quickly filled it with her more than ample breast. I
pulled her close and laid the most passion- ate kiss I could manage on her. I
whispered in her ear that I wanted to make love to her, right here on the porch,
all the while squeezing her breast and fondling her nipple through her clothes.

She looked at me kind of quizzically at first then she grabbed my head and
pulled me close for a passionate kiss of her own. Her tongue found her way into
my mouth and I remember wondering if that meant she'd said 'yes'.

I threw all caution to the wind after that, I brought my other hand up between
her legs and started to push it against her pussy. She was wearing jeans and a
pullover shirt so I ran my hands up the back of her shirt and loosened her bra,
it came off and was quickly deposited on the swing next to her. Now I fondled
and squeezed her bare breasts under her shirt. She had awesome tits and her
nipples were getting very big and very hard.

Our house had a lot of big trees in the front yard covering the view so I wasn't
very concerned about being seen from the street. You practically had to get
right up on the steps to see anything, especially in the dark. So I immediately
threw myself into the situation, determined to finally get into kari's pants
for real, and not with my just my hand.

I pulled up her shirt to expose her breasts and they were even more impressive
than I had thought. My tongue quickly found a hard nipple as I teased her,
biting it and sucking it wetly into my mouth. kari pulled me against her and in
a rough whisper begged me to play with her pussy.

Well who was I to disregard such a beautiful girl's request. But I tried a
different tack than I probably normally would have. I pulled her hard nipple
from my mouth and told to unbutton her pants for me. I wanted her to show me her
pussy, I was going to make her work a little for what she wanted.

Shockingly, it worked. Her hands eagerly undid the button on her jeans. I told
her to lower her pants around her ankles so I could get a good look at her, and
her pants quickly joined her bra on the swing beside her. I reached down with
one hand and moved one hand slowly up her inner thigh, I could feel the heat
coming from her pussy as I drew closer and closer. I came into contact with her
silky panties and I cupped the cleavage between her legs with my hand, just like
I'd done before, but this time there were no jeans between me and her pussy.

I moved her panties to the side and my finger found her slit, it was wet and hot
and I couldn't believe how turned on she was. Slowly I ran my finger up and down
the swelling lips of her pussy, teasing her, slipping my finger a little deeper
every time I moved it up and down. She begged me to stick it in and finger fuck
her. Who was I to argue with a request like that.

My finger sank into her wet pussy slow and deep. kari gave off a deep, growly
moan and pulled me closer. I started to move my finger in and out of her tight
cunt. I moved my lips back down to her breasts and continued to bite and lick
her nipples while my fingers slid into her moist pussy. I was really enjoying
myself but I suddenly decided that I wanted more. After all, this might not ever
happen again with Janet and I definitely wanted to get my tongue on her hot
pussy while I still had the chance.

I pulled my finger from her cunt and she quickly begged to keep finger fucking
her, that she was almost ready to cum. So I dropped to my knees and leaned close
between her legs, the smell of her turned on pussy was overwhelming. I leaned
closer, pulled her panties back to the side and then my tongue was running up
and down her lips where my fingers had been only moments ago. I couldn't believe
how turned on kari was, her pussy was practically dripping wetness down her
thighs, and in only a few minutes of eating her cunt, my face was completely
soaked. I pressed my face tighter against pussylips, licking and nibbling her
clit. I'd seen enough PentHouse magazines to to know about a women's clit, in
fact most of what I knew about sex came from PentHouse magazine. I was
determined for a little field maneuvers to test my theoretical knowledge.

My theoretical knowledge seemed to be holding up so far. kari had her hands on
the back of my head now and was pressing my face against her hot pussy as I
licked and sucked her. She started to thrust her hips back and forth and I
realized that she was coming. I pushed my tongue as deep into her pussy as I
could pressing against her clit and she bucked against me on the swing.

She held me tight and then finally, she relaxed back into the swing released her
grip on my head. I moved up and sat down next to her, caressing her breasts and
stroking her hair. She leaned against me, completely limp, her heavy breathing
was about the only movement she made.

She suddenly looked up and gave me kiss on the cheek and said that that had
really felt great. I was still feeling bold so I took her hand and brought it
down and pressed it against the bulge in the front of my pants. Then I told her
it was her turn to make me feel good as I ground my crotch into her hand.

She gave me a curious look as if she was trying to decide what to do, then she
slowly reached up and slid down the zipper to my jeans. I closed my eyes as her
hand snaked into my pants and came to rest on my hard, throbbing cock, still
trapped inside my jockey shorts. I gave a little grunt as her hand squeezed my
hard cock, and then she pulled it quickly out of my pants and out into the open.

She leaned over and looked at it closer, cooing and giggling at how hard it was.
Of course it was hard! She was the first girl who had ever played with my cock
much less seen it hard and out in the open. Her hand slowly moved up and down
the shaft as she whispered in my ear about how hard it was and how she didn't
realize how big my cock was.

My cock wasn't that big, but I was bigger than most of the guys in gym class,
but I never really thought about it being big. Her telling me how big my cock
was returned a little of the boldness I'd had earlier. I knew what I wanted, so
I put my hand on the back of her head and slowly pushed her down towards my
cock. She hesitated for a bit, maybe she thought I'd settle for a hand-job, but
my cock had felt my own hand too many times to ignore a situation like this.

So I told her I'd gotten too hot licking her pussy and now I needed a little
relief of my own. She was leaning over now, just inches from my cock, so I
lifted my hips off of the swing and slowly pushed the head of my cock between
her lips.

Apparently she only needed a little encouragement because she quickly sucked the
rest of my hard rod into her mouth. I was already turned on enough by eating her
cunt but her slurping, smacking noises on my cock were really getting me hot and
I knew it would only take a few minutes before I shot my load down her throat.

Now kari was bobbing her head up and down on my cock, sucking me into her mouth
and running her tongue over my shaft. My cock was really throbbing now as Janet
leaned over my lap and sucked my cock. I leaned back into the porch swing and
enjoyed the sensation she was giving me. I felt my balls start to tighten and I
knew I was going to cum. I told kari I was going to cum and she squeeze my
balls roughly and held my cock deep into her mouth. My cock twitched and my
first load of cum landed in karimouth. She jerked her beautiful head back as
the first spurts of sperm went into her mouth. And in doing so received several
shots of cum on the front of her shirt, before taking my cock back into her
mouth, and licking up my remaining spurts of jism. Wow!

Now it was my turn to collapse against the swing. After a few minutes my head
cleared and I sat back up to compose myself. But suddenly I got a real shock....
I saw my mother's face silhouetted in the dark front room window. I don't know
how long she'd been there, but there was no way she could miss my cum covered
cock hanging out in the open, with Janet sitting next to me in her panties, her
hand still playing with my cock.

I sneaked another look toward the dark window and she was gone.... I was sure
I'd seen her there, I wasn't THAT blown away by having my cock sucked. I quickly
tucked my cock back into my pants and helped Janet back into her pants. She only
lived a couple of blocks away so she said goodnight and headed off down the
street.

Hesitantly I walked into the house, but everything was quiet. I sneaked upstairs
and looked into my mother's room but it was dark there also, she seemed to be
sound asleep. It didn't take too long to convince myself I was seeing things and
I quickly forgot about the incident the next day. Not kari mind you, I couldn't
forget my first blow job and I was determined to repeat our performance of last
night as soon as possible.

Kari went to the lake with her parents and tai that weekend so I didn't see her again
till Monday. She agreed to go out with me and we went to the movies again. But
this time we didn't take any beer along with us. After the movie things
progressed as I wanted and we ended up on my porch swing again.

But when I reached over to stroke Kari
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#2
I skimmed through it rather quickly because I'm being rushed, but from what I read, it's pretty wicked!

We give it a 5... out of 5.
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#3
thank you
*bows*
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#4
Very very good.

Although i noticed a few grammical errors here and there.It was great
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#5
yeah i typed it originally on word but before i could change my laptop was restored to factory settings to fix the speakers but it was on a memory stick however i lost my works disk and notepad doesn't do spell checks

still people like it
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#6
although who is Janet
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#7
i'd origannly typed it for something else then changed the names for this and the story about twenty times
unfortunately some typo's got through
i got lazy ... or tired your choice
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#8
Quick constructive critisism: I skimmed through the lemon a little and was too disgusted to read the whole thing.

Guys, this is a reveiw forum. IF you're gonig to comment on a person's stroy, you flesh out your logic. Characterisation, spelling, grammar, story.... there are plenty of thingfs to comment on. If it was effective, why? And if it was ineffective, where and how?

First off, changing the names does not make a Digimon lemon. All it does is ensure your characterisation is wrong. Secondly, don't put out a lemon if you know there are errors you need to change.
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#9
i edited the lemon as much as i could without changing the plot
i do intend to work on it more when my works is up and running again i just needed to knoiw wether it was worth the effort
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