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A song, i wrote!!
TheGayGabuLover
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04-19-2007, 05:00 PM
Here, is teh lyrics for the song i just wrote you'll have to actually listen to how ising it for how it goes, im trying to get an acoustic guitar, but im not getting enough money..ANWYAS read the lyrics tell me if its good and whta music genra it sounds like (rock, Metal, country, hip-hop, R&B, stuff like that), thanks

I love you tonight
Written by: TheGayGabuLover (aka:Chirs gunter)


Oh ya! Tonight!
Oooooo! Tonight!

When we met did I Show you the,
Light!
When we tocuhed Did It Feel,
Right!
When i laughed was it a,
Sight!
Oh-oh,
I love you,
Tonight!

You do shine in the,
Sunlight!
When i first saw you, you were so,
Bright!
You were Nice....So
Polite!
Oh-oh,
I love you,
Tonight!

Ya, Ya, Oooooooo,
Tonight!
Yeah, Yeah, Oooooooo
Tonight!

I love you, will you love me,
Tonight!
Oh-yeah,
Did i ever show you the Light,
Oooooooo,
I love you Tonight!

Oh yeah, Tonight!,
Yeah, yeah, Tonight!,
Tonight!
(we were meant to be)
Tonight!
(Together)
I love you, I love you,
I love you tonight!
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04-19-2007, 05:22 PM
heh not so bad might go better with some music tho :P
you can do this one in every 30 times and still have 97% positive feedback
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04-20-2007, 12:43 AM
Here's my answer to anything: J-pop!
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04-20-2007, 02:35 AM
Not bad at all! Reads like a pop ballad, medium tempo, upbeat.
Great effort!! :D
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04-20-2007, 03:48 AM
Pop. But speed it up and put in some pointless audio tricks and you can say it's a dance/techno remix. OR get a semi-attractive female to sing it and call it j-pop.
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04-20-2007, 07:52 AM
:roll:Yeah, J-pop.... even though it isn't in Japanese, I'm sure it's cooler that way.
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04-20-2007, 01:23 PM
lol, thanks!
I Assumed t was pop, but it really dose sound like country
Is pop, another form of country or something? i dont know, lol
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04-20-2007, 01:42 PM
This is not bad at all, maybe you could try writing more, that'll help you improve and get even better than these!
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04-21-2007, 01:46 AM
Harie Krauzer Wrote::roll:Yeah, J-pop.... even though it isn't in Japanese, I'm sure it's cooler that way.

J-pop (and K-pop, too) has random English words in there all the time.

The Love Hina intro music has the words "It's so wonderful" randomly in the middle. Also, Team Rocket's blurb they do in every episode has the words "Lovely charmy" and "white hall."
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05-13-2007, 08:35 AM
(starts singing the lyrics like a death metal band) xD

ok hehe, the lyrics are not that bad but it is a wee-bit random for my taste...But hey, there are a plethora of songs that are worse then this one...

(really sounds like J-pop *giggles*)
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