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Desperation<chapter one and two.
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penname= Altima

please read this and comment

this may be a series... depends on if this one gets good comments...

Hello this is my first attempt at making a lemon. please excuse any and all grammatical errors. you may also notice I like to use 3 periods to end most of my sentences. don't you dare make fun of that. also my digimon knowledge isn't up to snuff. therefore I am going to use similar characters and digimon but change their partners up(to the benefit of this lemon). also, this has NOTHING to do with the main story soif things don't make sense, deal with it. with that said. here goes the story..

Desperation
Chapter 1

Finally after a hard day of schooling, beating up enemy digimon, and much more, Sora finally arrived safe at home. She only took of her pants and shoes, merely letting herself fall on her comfortable bed. she sighed, it was beginning to get to her, she hardly had any time now. With all that's going on she needed a break, she didn't even have a boy friend yet. how sad, well, she had the body and the looks, it's probably had to do with the fact that she had a digimon.. No one else had a digimon in her school

Enter Agumon, her digimon.or digital monster, it's a funny story because she and a few other kids, called digi-destined had all got these cool creatures, they were charged with the protection of the digital world and the real world. But then, her parents forced her to move.. She lost a lot of friends during the move, but now where she lived, she was slowly getting new friends, although non of them shared the experiences she had.which sucked.anyways, enough with the side-tracking and flashbacks.
Agumon approached his side of the room and jumped into his make-shift bed. Due to the move, his bed was packed up, and now that they are here, well; now they can't even find it, so they made him a makeshift bed out of a card-board box, and pillow sheets. he merely let a sigh of relief, it was good to be lying down right now. Since he had been with Sora for a year now, they were used to it. she didn't mind that she was half naked.

Sora was thinking about how life could have been before the digi-destined thing happened.could she have had a boyfriend? Maybe. she began to think about how having a boyfriend would have been more beneficial to her. she could have gone to watch movies, go to amusement parks. eat at restaurants.sex.wait.sex? Why that thought flash across her mind. she suddenly felt a yearning for it.knowing that wasn't going to happen soon.

She wondered though, why did it flash across her mind? Could it be that she's being over-worked? No. it can't be.can it? She began to think about it more and more. imagining all the actions that her Dream-man could do to her.putting his thick cock into her mouth, slowly pulling his shaft in and out of her mouth. suddenly another image showed up in her mind. she was sitting on top of him. his dick impaled inside her womb.
She was startled awake when Agumon put his paw on her shoulder,giving her a small shake."Sora, are you ok?" the small dinosaur asked.

"I'm fine, just.daydreaming a little.excuse me I have to go to the bathroom." she said hurriedly, as she began to walk towards the bathroom at a quick pace.once she arrived, she closed the door pretty quickly and took off her panties.

She felt her cunt, as her juices were oozing out. she could not believe ho wet she had gotten.and it was only to a few thoughts. Damnit, she though, she felt so horny at the moment..she began to think, maybe she DID need a boyfriend..

She merely sat on the toilet, and begin to slowly rub her labia.she didn't do it that often. usually she did it when she felt stressed. but she didn't feel stressed at all, but then again. she started to feel pleasured a bit, as she began to increase her pace, she learned how to masturbate without uttering a sound. She began to pant a little as she was slowly reaching her climax.

She then switched to sticking her fingers in and out of her cunt, starting with one finger, and gradually letting in more fingers as her climax was nearing. Suddenly, her dream lover flashed into her imagination right before her orgasm. she moaned out loud, loudly enough that her mom heard. "Sweetie, are you alright? What's going on?"

"Nothing," she said, slowly panting."I'm in the bathroom." she finished, as she withdrew her fingers. they were covered in her nectar.most people on porno sites eat this stuff. maybe its not so bad. she though to herself as she slowly brought her fingers to her mouth, inserted them, tasting all of her juices.

She, did the best to clean up the bathroom to hide any evidence of what just happened.she began to think that at this rate she was probably not going to lose her virginity...when she heard her mother, "Honey, I'm going to the store right now. ill be back in a few hours..". After hearing that, she formulated a plan. maybe she was going to lose her virginity soon.

Sora returned to her bedroom, like nothing had happened at all. she lied down on her bed, thinking about her mischievous plan. still listening for he signs that her mother was gone.the front door opened, then closed.car door opened, closed, motor start..then a car pulling away in the distances.coast is clear.

She stood up, Agumon paying no attention.Sora then cleared her throat, which caught Agumon's attention."well as you know.Agumon.. "she said nervously."We have known each other for a long time and.well I just wanted to say thanks."
"There's no need to thank me. but thank you, anyway."the tiny dinosaur said.

"But there is. I want to give you a gift as thanks for all the friendship you brought me.could you turn around for a second while I get your gift ready?" she Said. Agumon nodded and turned around, a smile on his face, just to make the surprise better, he closed his eyes and began to hum a tune that he enjoyed while listening to one of Sora's cd's.
Hook, Line, and Sinker. Sora thought as she began to undress what was left of her clothing.Slowly removing her shirt.letting her small breasts hang, she didn't like to wear a bra, she thought it felt uncomfortable. then she removed her panties, letting them slide down her legs.

As all this was going on, Agumon only heard rustling, he immediately thought .must have hid it under a pile of clothing so I would never find it.. Then he heard Soras voice as she told him to turn around, so he did that, his eyes still closed, until he was told to open them.




Chapter 2


The reaction on his face when he saw his trainer naked was priceless, eh quickly half turned around, shielding his eyes from her body. "Please, Sora, put some clothes on. have some decenc-" was all he could manage to say.

"Please, Agumon, I want to thank you... and well. this was the only thing I could think of." she said

"Perhaps you could have gotten me a new bed.." he said

"C'mon Agumon.I want you.I need you, because I'm a ..girl and you're a boy." she pleaded with the dinosaur.as she slowly stepped towards him.

"You can't use this for an excuse because you can't find a boyfriend." he told her.

"Agumon, please, do it for me.take me. I want you to take my purity." she pleaded with him again.as she edged closer.

"I can't. it goes against so many things. its not right for digimon to have sex with their trainers." he said to the young teen "it goes against everything I stand fo-" he was cut off as she slid her hand on his crotch, trying to unsheathe him.

"Then don't do me as a trainer, but as a friend." she said as she joined her lips with his. while slowly massaging his thick, yellow, shaft.

after they kissed, they slowly parted lips."That.feels.good.Sora." was all he could say."y'know.I still haven't had sex either.maybe this would do some good for us." he said, as he began to lie down on his bed, as he let the girl jack off his member.

" I bet I could make it feel better" she said as she slowly pumped his dick up and down.she suddenly stopped jacking off his cock, Agumon questioned her why she stopped as all of a sudden, she began to lick the tip. As she grasped his base.she kept pumping his member with one hand while she worked her tongue all over his shaft, once she arrived back at the tip, she engulfed most of her shat, as he grunted in surprised.she though, wow Agumon, your sensitive.

Sora kept bobbing her head up and down his member. slowly at first, but quickening her pace causing Augumon to moan, signaling that he was going to reach his climax, when his body reacted, he placed his hand on her head, to control her bobbing."I'm..going to cum." he said out loud."I can't hold it in anymore."

Sora though, please Augumon, release your load into my mouth.. when, she was granted her wish. with a small grunt, his hot semen filled her mouth. she didn't know what to do with it. until she remembered the porno sites again. didn't the girls swallow the stuff? So she did.at first. it was bitter, until she was used to it, she tried to swallow more of it.. But she couldn't find anymore in her mouth, so she checked the only location she knew.. Agumons cock.

She began to suck on his cock, trying to suction every last bit of cum he had.this of coursed tickled Agumon a bit.she kept on trying to suck out everything, as she felt his member throb inside his mouth.once she was sure that nothing was left, she got up up. She suddenly realized she was extremely wet. her labia hungered for Agumon.

Agumon noticed this, and crawled closer to her.. whispering "now its my turn to pleasure you." as he dipped his head in between her legs, letting his lizard-like tongue wander all over her pussy, lapping up as much of her juices as he could.

This brought a LOT of pleasure to Sora. She just lied back, and smiled.. Her dreams were coming true.partially..she just allowed Agumon to keep lapping at her wet pussy.this was just making her hornier.

Agumon continued to bathe her cunt until he was satisfied.then he began to work his tongue on her cunt. he was enjoying this. even though he knew it wasn't right to do it. In the first place.ah well. you only live life once. he thought. then he felt Sora's hand on the back of his head.she needed his support right now.he switched from licking the outside of her labia, to actually tongue-fucking her.he slid his longish tongue down her cunt, licking everywhere. he then grabbed her legs to help him slide his tongue deeper into her womb..

She was getting excited real fast. she felt like she was going to cum at any minute.she began to rock her hips back and forth.as Agumon forced his snake-like tongue deeper inside her.oh GOD she couldn't hold it in anymore.she moaned real loud as she exploded all over Agumons face.

They both laid here for a few seconds. trying to catch their breath. when Sora spoke up."its time Agumon, take my purity now." she said, heavily panting.as her face neared his. they once again, locked lips.

"I will..Sora." the yellow dinosaur said.. As he stood on his knees.his member slowly growing back to full size. Sora stood on all fours, her back towards him. Agumon, slowly edged forward, he carefully placed the tip of his dick, on her labia.he slowly pushed it in, parting her lips, as he heared ragged breaths from Sora.

Then, slowly, inch by inch, he inserted his member deep within her womb. this caused Sora to gasp in pain as her hymen was broken. she forgot about virgin sex..it HURTS the first time.this surprised Agumon for a moment. he slowly slid his cock back out, until Sora told him to put it back in. he did as she commanded.he once again inserted himself deep within her.

God she felt tight. Agumon thought to himself as he began to rock forward and backwards against Sora.he had never realized how good having sex felt like.he continued to think, his thoughts drowning out Sora's groans and moans.well at least he had something to tell the other digimon.he could finally say things like "I got laid!" and such. as he began to come back to realization, Sora told him to push harder and deeper. he obeyed her, and pushed farther inside her, faster. his balls slapping against her legs.

They both began to rock their hips as they began to reach their climax, once again."oh! Sora. I'm gonna cum.." "Me too, Oh.Agumon, deeper! DEEPER!" She cried out to Agumon. "I'm cum-MING! AGUMON!" "SORA!" they both called out to each other as they both came at the same time.

Wet.exhausted.and out of breathe..they both looked at each other as Sora said "Thank you.Agumon." she fell on the floor.passed out.Agumon then got up and picked her up.he had enough energy to get her in bed. that way no-one would be suspicious.. Once he did all he could, he walked back to his bed, and passed out.

An hour later Sora's mom came in and woke up Sora.she called for Sora. "how have you been? And whats that strange smell in this room??" she questioned.they forgot about the smell.if she took a look at the stains on the carpet. they were done for."well, whatever it is. get rid of it. its revolting." she said to them as she walked out of Sora's room.what a lucky break.

Sora turned over to Agumon, thank you agumon.do you think.maybe.we could." she fumbled for words..

"the answer is yes.not whenever, but sometimes."the dinosaur responded with a smile. and so ends this strange story of desperation..

The End
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#2
That's pretty good but you need to proofread it some more and format it.
Again, nice work.
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#3
Pretty good first attempt, all you need to do is fix the formatting. Other than that, good story.
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#4
ty and congratulations! you are the first to comment my story! yay! you win 100 bazillion dollars!!!! w00t!....well....you would have won that amount...if i had that much money... but thanks for the comment...
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#5
I refuse to read this story until you correct the grammar and capitalization. Sub-par English will not be accepted in *this* Author's Domain!
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#6
Quote:I refuse to read this story until you correct the grammar and capitalization. Sub-par English will not be accepted in *this* Author's Domain!

Then I suggest you get busy editing your own then.
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#7
Grammar - You need to correct this seriously, Altima. You push away people because of this....

Capitalisation - Believe it or not, you need this Altima. Always where it is needed. It isn't a 'can', it's a 'must' for a proper, and good lemon. Otherwise you're going to turn down viewers from the immediate beginning with bad grammar and capitalisation, no matter how good the start might be.

Plot - Pointless. It has no real plot besides the 'getting to the sex'. Work on that with later lemons.

Errors - Your grammer and capitalisation is one. But, 'trainers' is the incorrect word from the start, even for Season 1. The trainers are not trainers, they are Digidestined.

Lemon - The lemon scene is alright in length, but seriously, you're grammer and capitalization butchers it.

All in all, a 4 or possible 6 out of 10.
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