Review of One of the Lemons That Time Forgot

[Anonmon]

And by that I mean my September contest submission: http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/anon...ether.html . Contrary to what Da Wofle put next to the title, it's a full lemon rather than lime, despite my only using explicit terms sparingly.

Since ratings for the September contest (those two entries are the Lemons That Time Forgot) never came in, could somebody, anybody please review this the old-fashioned way? Also, I remember Wisemon actually anticipated this story since it was a songfic. Come read the lousy song! It's not rock-and-roll, nor does it have a philosophical or political subtext!

[Wisemon]

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[Anonmon]

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