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That One Internet Guy
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09-21-2006, 12:18 PM
Why are these walls here?
I will make these walls shatter.
Free my soul and mind.


I pulled that out of my ass in 30 seconds. Anyone else got something? The rules for a Haiku are 3 verses, 5 syllables in the 1st, 7 in the 2nd, and 5 in thd 3rd.
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09-22-2006, 12:41 PM
Haikus can't contain
my flagrant contradictions,
So go fuck yourself.
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We froze but for a moment
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09-22-2006, 02:16 PM
Well SOB. You actually did it. Very clever.
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09-23-2006, 07:28 AM
Well that seemed hostile
OMFG WTF
Alright kthnxbai
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09-23-2006, 01:10 PM
Quote:Well that seemed hostile
OMFG WTF
Alright kthnxbai

Well SOB. You actually did it. Very clever.
Neither of these are 5-7-5. Read "W" aloud.
Also, none of what we wrote was actually a haiku without nature references.
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We froze but for a moment
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09-23-2006, 11:30 PM
Oh. Fuck it, then. Lock, please.
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09-24-2006, 03:38 AM
A hideous stream
Crimson flows through the valley
I should have used lube


A cold pouring rain
Trees sway and bend in the wind
I'm going inside


Birds chirping at me
The sun's golden light flows in
Fuck you, I want sleep
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09-24-2006, 04:57 AM
Those actually made me grin, which very rarely happens on the internet, despite how many 'lol's' or 'rofl's' I put out there.
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09-24-2006, 02:40 PM
Ghost_Op Wrote:Oh. Fuck it, then. Lock, please.
I am this board's mod,
Do you really want a lock,
Put on this topic?
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09-25-2006, 01:55 AM
Yes I do think so.
It's out of our 'bil'ty. (Yes, I cheated)
It seems the best choice.
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