07-19-2006, 08:35 PM
Characterisation and emotion should be dealt with in every story, anyway.
I'd say Action, Emotion, Sensation. Discribe, in deep detail, what characters are doing; discribe the feelings generated by these actions. The sesations created in your characters give your readers something to relate to and put themselves into: that is a secret of good a sex scene.
I'd say Action, Emotion, Sensation. Discribe, in deep detail, what characters are doing; discribe the feelings generated by these actions. The sesations created in your characters give your readers something to relate to and put themselves into: that is a secret of good a sex scene.