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This is the forum in which an author asks for a reveiw. Ask Marine, Dragonmaster, or myself for a reveiw here, posting a link to the fiction in question.

For reveiwing styles, click here. Or, alternativly, look down, to where, using this funny little thing called "Copy and Paste", I have put the reveiwer profiles, making them easily accessible for all.

Marine Wrote:Back Ground: I've been a reviewer on the DHZ for about a year as an estimate, and have critiqued different stories and forms of craft which were appealing in their seperate ways.

Tastes: I like everything, even vore, if the authors get so daring. Yoai, Yuri, BDSM, orgy, straight, etc. It's all fair game to me.

Specific Critique Areas: As much as I am a fan of using 'style' as a shield to guise mal-formed writing, I look into the prose he/she tends to display that style. I center around dialogue content and delivery of actions scenes, transitions, and background scenes. There's no doubt I'm a setting fanatic; it's the element of style I base tutalege under.

Dragonmaster Wrote:From what I have read, including MANY Renamon fics, I came to a basic conclusion that I love furries, so I almost always try to include them (hence Gatomon and Renamon lol). I like writing various things, including Yaoi, Yuri, Rape... well, I know you already noticed I haven't yet sent any of them (excluding the Satisfaction series of course) but it's not that I don't like them, I want to start them through inspiration (which I have been short of right now). One of the things I love is the use of Dras in Lemons as well, ANY type suits me really, my opinion is that Flamedramon for example goes well with almost all the (humanely possible. please no Numemon/Sukamon *shudders) digimon you can choose from. Something that I've been trying and that I'm besting myself in is the drama using as well. To tell you the truth, I abor it, but something makes me want to add some to my own stories, lol.

Anyways, I like reviewing BSDMs, Straights, Yaois, Yuris... they all turn me on, and in return, I give very much attention to them, without skipping ANYthing in the lemon. Romantic ones are of my liking as well, sometimes, it makes a story flow more than properly. The only thing that I don't give much interest is when it's human/human, I never liked the
VERY young ones between themselves like that, BUT, if it's digimon/human or digimon/digimon, YUP! it goes!

Herr Mullen Wrote:Herr Mullen leaned back in his chair. it gave a long, dull creak. "It looks like I need to write a profile, Jyou."
"Yes, Herr Mullen."
"How about; "Slim, attractive young man seeking young, creative author"?"
"No, Herr Mullen."
Herr Mullen frowned with the weight of thinking.
"Well, then, what about "Cooler than most"? Or "Hip reviews for happening groovesters"?"
Jyou groaned. "Herr Mullen," he said, "Why don't you just let me write your profile for you?"
Mullen shifted. "If feels a little like cheating."
"No, Herr Mullen, it's not. No one said you have to write it."
"That's true... It was just "Send me a profile", wasn't it?"
"Yes, Mullen. Shall I go do it now?"
"You know what Jyou? I think you should. To the profile."

Attention, authors; for reviews of quality and evaluations of esteem, assign your works to Herr Mullen, who appreciates Yaoi, however regrets that he has yet to see Frontier and will begin watching Savers only when it's ended, and thus cannot cater to your valuable lemons, limes, and stories from those areas of programming. Herr Mullen has a good ear for metaphor and poetic devices, and will not pass over good comedy. Also likes a good sex scene and plot. If you want to receive the Herr Mullen Hurrah, want an honest evaluation of your tales, want a shining recommendations to readership, then Herr Mullen is the reviewer for your writing works.

" You're a damn good reviewer."
-Wisemon.

"...You have the decency to write a review that actually outlines the salient points of the story, instead of just saying "Yeah, this sucked and I didn't like it. 0 out of 10." You flesh out your logic so at least people get an understanding from where you're coming from."
-Senjuro.

"(Go England!)"
-Gunther Van Crimson.

Jyou gave Herr Mullen the paper. "Here we are. What do you think?"
Herr Mullen squinted over his glasses. "...Herr Mullen Hurrah?"
"Well, you know."

So, there you have it. Dragonmaster specialises in all fetishes, but has a perferance for furries, Marine in scenery and background, however, is also a fetish expert, whilst I look at literary devices (when I spot them) and comedy.
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#2
There are two other reveiwers who've escaped our attentions, thus far. There were added after This was posted, so this is an update.

The other two reveiwers are Nate Hunter, and Jo-Lo.

Nate Hunter Wrote:My primary focus is on the overall story, but I can't do that without my grading criteria, seen in the Writing Contests. None of my reviews are snap judgments, typically they are based in a minimum of 2 readings -- one for the overall writing first, and a second to critique the finer details of my criteria.

I am willing to review anything, with the exceptions of vore and scat and snuff lemons (a few things I can't stomach). So, at least anything I would write (which is almost everything not mentioned prior). Incest, BDSM, yaoi, yuri, almost all things are fair game to me, and I'll review them fairly.

For my credentials, I DO run the... semi-regular... Writing Contests on this site, so I've had some good experience with judging, and my writing is something I strive to keep at the peak of my capabilities (I wouldn't dare to publish a sub-par story if I could still improve it). I expect the same of other authors, and will not pull my punches simply because an author is new or well established.

Jo-Lo Wrote:Background: I was a reviewer of a great author called RavenX on another site. I helped her get her stories up faster since someone else was able to read and fix the stories. She said that I was doing a great job. So I think I am good enough to be a reviewer on Digiartists Domain.

Taste: I enjoy almost anything except for 2 definate things...Scat and Blood. I don't mind anything else, but I do tend to favor Yaoi, vampires, and AU's.

Specific Critque Areas: I am a stickler for puncuation marks and that the word typed is the correct word there. IE: Write/right. I take my time to make sure everything is as good as I can see. Hopefully, that will be enought. *smiles* So chose me if you want a through and true review!
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