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Dark Renamon's moves
#1
Okay, for the sake of my first up-and-commin' lemon, this info is absolutely vital...yes, I'd like at least a couple of moves on him (yes; HIM)that Renamon doesn't have.

Also, is it reasonable to say one of his moves is "Onyx Storm?" (Exactly like Renamon's "Diamond Storm," just with black shards instead of white.)
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#2
If you want darkness make them killing moves. Like he teleports behind the opponent and slits their throat.
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#3
"Onyx Storm" sounds like a move a female Digimon would do, but the black shards is a cool idea. When in doubt, rip off cool moves from video games.

*thinks*
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#4
How about something like "Darkness Shards" or "Onyx Barage"
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#5
Or instead of small shards, huge pointy crustals of it? Then you could put a really extreme slant on it, like "Onyx Annihilation" or something.
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#6
Or you can even name it "Chaos Rain"! Or "Onyx Hurricane"! Lol- I'm just saying what ever comes to mind! Torture Tempest kinda strikes me weird!
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#7
Or the Attack would be Searing Shards black but with a seemingly iridecent searing quality to them that makes the area around them shimmer like a heat wave?
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#8
Hey, thx so far. More ideas would be great. Hmmm...Onyx Annihilation...Searing Shards...cool. What I was trying to do before was essentially make a "dark" Renamon (no pun intended), with maybe one or two different moves.

Here's an idea. The main human char will definitelly be an uber sword trainee, or something. Howabout I take that "teleport behind enemies and slit their throats" idea and tweak it to meet these means. Whadya think?
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#9
Since most people automatically think of Renamon as a female, you'll have to do a bit of extra legwork to make his maleness more prominant. The second part of any attack (the part that usually ends in -er) is what makes it sound girly. Words like "Blaster" "Devastation" and so forth are pretty masculine sounding.

Flying black shards...

Hmm...

"Material Darkness!" How's that for lame? lol
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#10
HEY! I City of Heroes I am A Tech Blaster ...- mortal wound -...well...As it goes I would have attempted a different name for the entire Digimon itself....something akin to a darker reality entirely. - over active imaginations YEY! -[/img]
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