Gaze into the eyes of a monter

[Nate Hunter]

A lot of the errors are semantic or grammatical, but the plot also feels a bit weak, even for a Takari which seems to incorporate the common Anti-Veemon/Davis attitude that they'd resort to violence to get Kari/Gatomon found in many Takari stories.

This wasn't Anti-Veemon/Davis lemon. And the two didn't resort to violence to get Kari/Gatomon.

I said "seems" -- as Circeus pointed out, we don't really know whether Veemon did or did not resort to Violence, we only have his word that he didn't do it, as well as an incriminating situation. I never said the story was an anti-Veemon or anti-Davis, only that is seems to have a certain attitude common of such fics. I have a little persona.l work to do before I review this properly, though, so until then, peace.