[AOTM] The August Contest [Updated: FINAL SCORES]

[MISTER BIG T]

Due to this, and the fact that the story is a fetish piece, I'm, afraid that it is unfortunately disqualified for its lack of a proper sex scene.

Uhh what? There was masturbation and there was rape, penetration and ejaculation and such. Didn't you originally say

Free for All - As it implies, anything goes. No restrictions on straight/homosexual, digimon, human, etc. Whatever you want to write you can enter.

Now, why is it that he warns me not to go on if I'm disturbed by it, and then enters it in a contest where I have to read it when the entire concept revolts me?

That warning was mostly there for the average readers and such. And plus, I just wanted an excuse to talk about lesbians dressed as sows.

If he crushes an eye after this whole ankle thing, I am going to be sick.

I originally thought of making eye ball torture that would have ended with consumnation of the said eye in front of her face. But then I remembered I had already done stuff like that (In "Davis dies the hardway", for anyone caring) and people would just wonder if I've got some hatred towards eyeballs.



Oh well, too bad it didn't shock as much as I had originally hoped when I started writing the story. I'm happy that I didn't get exactly 0 score either, so I suppose not all went wrong. Nice reviews, still and I'm looking forward to the next month contest. :)