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fred_18 Wrote:yeah, i fgured as much... but i'm the person that likes to bring the complete opposites out of people. and besides it is a few years after the D-Reaper incident so things can change, they could've had a few drinks every now and then.

You'd have to show how that works. You can't just say "...And Takato became a drug addict" without saying why, and how, not jusy fob the reader of with "I like to show people's opposites", becuase that translates to "You aren't really reading about the characters you want to read about."
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Problems... - by fred_18 - 06-16-2006, 12:46 AM
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