04-21-2006, 02:00 AM
Keep this up. I cannot say just how much I'm enjoying these. Accurate characters (Iroi wasn't at all bad), perfect spelling a grammar, fantastic punchlines, which are well delivered, indeed. Your Yamato-Gabumon pairing made me say "aww", and Iori does think like that. If only out of a need to be harsh, I have to inform you "chin" should be plural in the first sentence of Whipped Cream. Well done, indeed.