01-24-2006, 11:57 AM
Currently working on geting my Fics online....there not really lemons...but they are action....y?
.....so look at for that Brothers!
.....so look at for that Brothers!
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02-05-2006, 03:03 PM
Sorry for Double postin...BUT HERE IT IS
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Poke' Huntin: Rating....R Disclaimer:I DONT OWN DIGIMON.....OR ICP!...I Do Own IDP (A/N:...this was me thinking after reading Boss Reos Slim Pati song Fics....This Goes out to the Juggalos & Poke Haters) (based after 02...alittle) *The Setting is the end of matt's current tour of the country.in the bus* Matt:....im tired of rock...for once i wanna find something weird.....not normal,to expand my rep a bit *Tai(now his Roadie)comes runnin to matt with a CD in hand* Tai:i think this will suit you... *Tai Shows matt The Cover.the background is all block with a Green and Purple jack-in-the-box thing in the center* Matt:...who is it? Tai:some band...Insane Clown something...i dont remember....but they are a good group. Matt:so what are they... Tai:rap and rock in a mixture..... Matt:*puts in CD player*....i hope this gives me something... ~+~A Month Later on TRL~+~ Some random MTV tard:this is IDP,the Insane Digimon Posse, with there new single "Poke' Huntin"! (this is where it whouldnt hurt to listen to the Song Chicken Huntin' and then read this....its on the Riddle-Box. http://music.yahoo.com/ar-253021-videos-...lown-Posse Just Copy And Paste that to your Address box and click on Chicken Huntin' In The Video Section) ~+~The Beat of Chicken Huntin' By ICP~+~ Violent M:well im headed to the poke' center Im Goin' Poke' Huntin Chopin pokemon,poke' necks i aint sayin nothin to the Pikachus,stick my barrel in his eye. Boom Shaka,Boom Shaka Seein Poke'Heads Fly Why I Never Like Pokemon Pie Or The Choped Poke On Rye Tell Mr Ash Ketchem imma cut his neck up Slice,Poke,Chop,Chop,Stab,Cut Tai 2 Dope:Whatdo you do with a Drunkin Pikachu? Violent M: Cut his Fuckin Eyes out, feed them to his aunt nilly willy willy poke' neck poke' huntin gotta love it hit em with the 12 gauge bucket Poke Nuggets Layed Out all over the the room send in Devimon,make him witness doom last as long as you can my man cuz when that poke' head hits the fan you got Blood,Guts,Fingers and Toes Blood,Guts,Fingers and Toes Blood,Guts,Fingers and Toes Sittin front row to the poke' show..so (Chours)Whos Goin Poke' Huntin? We's Goin Poke' Huntin! Whos Goin Poke" Huntin'? We's Goin Poke Huntin! Who's Goin poke' huntin'? We's Goin Poke' Hunten! Cut a Motha Fuckin Poke up! Tai 2 Dope:Let me get a poke' sandwitch with mamwitch Im finna wreck on a poke' neck chopin up Ash, Misty, and brockzilly cause i chop motha fuckin pokemon silly peeped in the yard,tell ya what i see i seen a pikachu...fuckin a tree i said"pikachu what the fuck you tryin to do?" Violent M:*mockinly*"Pika,Pika,Pika,Pikachu!" Tai 2 Dope:Barrels in his mouth bullets in his head the back of his heads all over the shed Boom Shaka Boom Chop Chop im Tai 2 dope, and it aint no thing. to cut a poke' move real slowly cut off his head,but his fingers still pokey. Last as Long as you can my mon cuz when that poke' head hits the lawn you got Blood,Guts,Fingers and Toes Blood,Guts,Fingers and Toes Blood,Guts,Fingers and Toes Sittin front row to the poke' show (chours) Violent M:went to pallet, Brought my mallet Met this little hottie mama name May Ridin an old car real broke down while im drivin by in my little pimped out low ride mach bike,BLAM! Tai 2 Dope:Poke' Fella Potion sella Hangin by his neck bone poke' bones locked in my cella yellow belly poke' trucka ...ya pikacu fucka Both:Whos Goin Poke' Huntin? We's Goin Poke' Huntin! Whos Goin Poke" Huntin'? We's Goin Poke Huntin! Who's Goin poke' huntin'? We's Goin Poke' Hunten! Cut a Motha Fuckin Poke up! Violent M:yo,this the New Shit IDP....Run out and by it! Tai 2 Dope:Yeah, and to our Main Mon Slim Pati...Thanks fo' the hook up Violent M:Much motha fuckin Wicked Digi Love....WE OUT! ~+~End~+~ Seit:....dont hurt me Violent M:WE THE NEW SHIT.... Tai:matt, the fic is done you can stop....and please take off the face paint Matt:.....fine...*kicks Seits leg in* Seit:AAH.....son of a bitch! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
02-05-2006, 04:03 PM
This is like restroom stall wall writing.
![[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]](http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g100/baw01002/Album%20Covers/AppealtoReason.jpg) "I looked up and saw you; I know that you saw me. We froze but for a moment In empathy."-Rise Against
02-05-2006, 10:49 PM
Oh, no. A script. Grammar and spelling are issues. It's "Mother". The "e" and the "r" make an "err" sound, whilst an "a" makes an "ah" sound. It's a simple consept called the phonetic alphabet. A poor attempt at humour at the end.
Also, actions are put in brackets. Like so; (Herr Mullen banged his head against the wall, repeatedly.) not in asterics. Those are for sums.
02-06-2006, 02:35 AM
1st off...the whole thing is a failed attempt at humor...or anything else O.o
the bad grammar is all me...and im fucking proud of it... i love the cronstructive criticism thanks ill put what you said to heart..but it was my first one ive ever posted..but not the 1st one i wrote.. P.s. i know somebody is gonna write"you could have fooled me." |
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