I hate writing shit; it is so stupid

[Marine]

Wait, you think I'm too harsh on style? Have you seen some of Marine's reviews on the DHZ? I'm not nearly that critical. You need to think more relatively.

Don't confuse your definition of style with my reviews. I don't press being critical. They ask for an honest review and I give it to them. Unlike you, however, I describe what ditters a perfect score--setting or otherwise--and give them suggestions on how to improve their prose and style.

Never try to ostricize my critique style because your trying to defend some apathetic reason behind your curt reviews.

There are some things a writer can improve that doesn't effect style. It could dillute the stories full intentions without the writer knowing it. Things like repitition of phrases, stilted dialogue, reflections of actions, are all things nuetral--not related to style. Of all people, you could merit such a lesson, but that's another story.

I only enforce setting because it builds a novel. And when I see authors trying to convey it, I give them a push of flavor they could use for their own tastes.

So don't try and interpret my critques for your short comings.