04-28-2006, 01:40 AM
"Momentai" looses its meaning in the first series univerce, as no-one has heard it, so Tai made up his own meaning.
I like water, and rivers. I cross a bridge on my way to town everyday; looking across it I can see the swans and sunlight reflecting in it, and, more recently, pink and geen trees on the riverbank. Tai and Matt always proclaim their love for one another next to a lake or river in yaoi fanfiction; I take the micky out of that clishe.
Corresponding narration to dialogue is always a problem. Reading and writing variations of "said" repeatedly makes me feel childish. My Series is proving very difficult in that respect due to the volume of characters.
That's for the review, Wise, I'm enjoying the feedback.
I like water, and rivers. I cross a bridge on my way to town everyday; looking across it I can see the swans and sunlight reflecting in it, and, more recently, pink and geen trees on the riverbank. Tai and Matt always proclaim their love for one another next to a lake or river in yaoi fanfiction; I take the micky out of that clishe.
Corresponding narration to dialogue is always a problem. Reading and writing variations of "said" repeatedly makes me feel childish. My Series is proving very difficult in that respect due to the volume of characters.
That's for the review, Wise, I'm enjoying the feedback.