03-20-2006, 05:52 PM
Okay, we've got a new crop; I skimmed through one story:
KyoHaSuiGetsu's "Chapter 1: And So It Begins..."
Wow, I think this guy really likes obscure videogames. He's constructed an elaborate plot semi-based on Adventure, but it's mostly full of original characters; don't let the "Kouji" fool you. This is also written mostly in script format, but for an artist, it's still not badly written. It's just a little too many liberties for my taste. I give it 6.5/10.
Conversely, DV85's stuff, which was previously all in script format, has now been reworked into standard narration. Everybody should check it out. He's one of the best authors on the site.
KyoHaSuiGetsu's "Chapter 1: And So It Begins..."
Wow, I think this guy really likes obscure videogames. He's constructed an elaborate plot semi-based on Adventure, but it's mostly full of original characters; don't let the "Kouji" fool you. This is also written mostly in script format, but for an artist, it's still not badly written. It's just a little too many liberties for my taste. I give it 6.5/10.
Conversely, DV85's stuff, which was previously all in script format, has now been reworked into standard narration. Everybody should check it out. He's one of the best authors on the site.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against