I hate writing shit; it is so stupid

[Wisemon]

Next up, a board member, the dude who calls himself Shadowknight. I actually read the first lemon in both of his series. The Flamedramon and Lillymon one wasn't so great. Three inch diameter dicks are a no-no, and Lillymon's strawberry scent was certainly not Shadowknight's concept. Rather, I'll review "Home Sweet Home."


This is a fairly decent lemon. I wouldn't say that it's great about any character's characterization, but I like how it doesn't over-mush Takari. It's a straight sexual relationship...well, not quite. There are hints of TK's mom getting involved in later chapters, and it's said that she and TK have that special kind of relationship that's only legal in Alabama. Supposedly, this is based off of Prophet's manga, written as a favor for...I don't care.

The sex scene is pretty good, not quite good enough to masturbate, but pretty good. My major problem is the lead up to the sex scene. The jokes aren't bad, but it feels very rushed. They're suddenly in a diner, and then a house, and the house is an apartment:

"Once the arrived outside TK's house Nancy opened the door and let them out "I have to pick up a few things but I'll be back in a couple of hours. You two behave yourselves till I get back."
Once they were inside TK's apartment they headed to his room and began thinking about how he should tell her about his mom"

Did I miss something? Of course, this whole thing could be helped with spelling and grammar corrections, but that's true of almost every lemon. As it stands now, this is a workable series, but it's not my kind of series. My grade: 8/10