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heres a sneak peek of a lemon ive been working on...
#1
heres a sneak peek of a lemon ive been working on, judge me now, do i suck? or do i stink like hell? im doing this for the anttention.(slaps head) and i wanna know if im cut out to write lemons, so please, judge carefully, swear if you must, send me flames if need be, just judge.
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#2
New Adventures: A Digimon Lemon
(Digimon/final fantasy VIII crossover)
By: GunterVanCrimson

DISCLAIMER: I do not own digimon, they belong to either Bandai or Toei, and the only digimon I own is Flamedramon: Solemn Mode, he
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#3
This really should be in the author's section. Can somebody move it?
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#4
I thought this board was eay to navagate, ah well.

Enjoy your new home thread.
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#5
Somehow it got here to the author section.
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#6
Cause i moved it here...
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#7
Cause i moved it here...
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#8
[quote=GunterVanCrimson]DISCLAIMER: I do not own digimon, they belong to either Bandai or Toei, and the only digimon I own is Flamedramon: Solemn Mode, he
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#9
I'm not a fan of script conventions. It cuts out narrative, which is what I rely quite heavily on. A prose writer should not cut out the voice of The Narrator. The Narrator can be a hugely funny, interesting, or stylish thing in a story. I think that the way The Narrator is written is a reflection on the author, and on the style.
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#10
(-wait... -when did I post this? hmmm...)

oh yeah- I keep getting monologue and dialogue mixed up! sorry!

I'll just tweak the disclaimers, and try again! thanx!
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