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1000 Good Intentions
#1
Yep, this is my 1000th post, and Wiseman is my real last name. I have good news for those of you who enjoy my poems/songs. I have about three dozen written, and I'm just deciding how I want to compile them. I know that the following "song" will be an opening track on an album type thing. This is a little anthem I wrote for myself. I'll admit that the verse pattern is a little borrowed, but it makes for a good sing-along. I've honestly tried this out (singing it), and it flows really well.


Original Wiseass

Until the end of March
[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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#2
Oh yes of course its your 1000th post!
Just recently you made your own topic, and since then, you've been babbling random nonsense and madness!
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#3
hey this is like that one offspring song Original Prankster
I got that one then I looked it up to check good job copying the rythem
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#4
Quote:hey this is like that one offspring song Original Prankster
I got that one then I looked it up to check good job copying the rythem
Thanks, that was my goal, and I don't think I made it all that subtle. It's one of my favorite songs. As far as meaning goes, this poem isn't so great, but I'm just really proud of my rhyming ability on this one.
[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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#5
good for you it does kinda rhyme well
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