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#1
For my 650th post, I'm offering a large teaser for the story in my sig. Of all of the stories I've written, this one is my favorite, though not necessarily my best emotion-wise. After you read this section, you'll know why this story is "special", and how it gets its title. Please, read and review, and if you like this preview, do likewise for the full version. It'll help your understanding if you read the rest of the series first, but I'm not holding a gun to your head. This story has quoted lyrics from The Offspring, Alice In Chains, Nirvana, Stone Temple Pilots, Soundgarden, Rage Against The Machine, and Audioslave. From "I Think I'm A Clone Now (Pretty Fly For A Rabbi)":


The green, blue, and yellow jumpsuits were unzipped, and the three Junpeis pulled their members out of their briefs.
Izumi stared at the Junpeis
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"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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#2
you know you're quite the angry weird little writer right?
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#3
I just submitted the next few lemons in my series. Since I haven't gotten too many reviews of this preview so far, I figured I'd share some more of this one. Please, if you enjoyed jacking off to the first part, or even if you didn't, any comments at all that you have would be appreciated. For instance, if I could get that Hunter Scale thing, that'd be nice (I'll even partially pre-return the favor for it; "Whips and Roses" was a well written lemon). After all, the finished product is my favorite, and this way, I get it to a slightly different audience.


[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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#4
more musicial references you writing flux0red stuff and you being wierd and of course you're my friend heh
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#5
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#6
Don't think I don't know what you're up to. Now you're just trying to piss off the authors. Little do you realize, you can't get to me when you're hitting truth again. I'm proud of the fact that my writing comes from a deep and dark place in my mind, a lonely cranial room created by my lifelong disdain and envy for kids my own age.
[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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#7
No I'm not trying to piss of the Authors. The quote button looks shiny.
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#8
Speaking of quotes, why don't you tell me where this one comes from?
Quote:You could put "the institue" as the name of the whole forum, and I dont think people would notice much of a change in the description
Are you sure you're not trying to piss off the authors? I'm not the biggest Lord Archive fan myself, but amongst the other authors, I'm pretty sure that he's the most respected and admired one. You could make yourself really hated really fast by taking some shots at him.
[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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#9
Wisemon Wrote:a lonely cranial room created by my lifelong disdain and envy for kids my own age.
you too sometimes
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#10
Quote:You could put "the institue" as the name of the whole forum, and I dont think people would notice much of a change in the description

Thats not an insult, and its not reffering or directed at him.
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