Well I just finished adding the final touches to it, and together my first venture into the digi-lemon field tips the scales at a hair under 15 pages long. So I can't post the whole thing here. But I'll post a section, and hopefully you guys can give me some feedback before I submit the whole thing to Togashi for the main Lemon section.
Anyway, here's the first part of my lemon, "Pent Up":
Renamon was pacing back and forth in Rika
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That was definitely good. Very humorous. Nice caracterization. Can't wait to see what's coming next.
Yeah, it's deffinitly good man, nicely put together and everything.
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Nice, I'll upload it to my site in awhile man.
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Lord Patamon Wrote:King of sadism alright, that's a perfect title for you
That was a great lemon. I can't wait to read the rest. I'm about to post my first lemon, though I dought it's as good as your's :D
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When are we treated to the second part? :D
Lord Patamon Wrote:King of sadism alright, that's a perfect title for you
Very nice work man; but I'm curious too, whens the next part coming?
