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[InsaneImpmon]

Contrary to popular claims, Renamon didn't delete me. Sure she'd love to but she can't delete me at all.

Actually I had just lost interest in Digimon hentai a while back and practically dropped off from the face of the Earth. Until yesterday when I found my long lost muse with perverted intent.

I do have a number of fanfics I've written and posted to the old forum but never got it in the DAD fanfic section. I'll have to dig them up and send 'em in.

I spent maybe 4 or 5 hours on this one (I watched Spirited Away and Kiki's Delivery Service while typing this and combined they are 3.5 hours long). It's a big Yaoi with Cody, TK, Davis, Izzy, Matt, and Tai in the mix. I do have some more ideas to continue this one but that'll be a separate chapter for another time.

EDIT: some correction and a small revision in the ass business part. Plus a disclaimer. This version will be the one posted in fanfic archive under my name.

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Truth and Dare from Hell
Started May 10 2003

AN: It had come to my attention that this fanfic was somewhat similar to another Truth and Dare fanfic by Lord Archive (Red Digivice Entry 13 - Slumber Party) I want to assure I never intended to plagiarize. Since there are too many similarities to be coincidence, it is likely I may have read his fanfic more than a year ago, forgot about it, and wrote this fanfic from ground up with some similar ideas. So to be on the safe side, I'll credit Lord Archive for ideas for this fanfic. Be sure to read Lord Archive's fanfic if you liked this one.

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Dear Diary

[BlueVmon]

LMAO, omg, i loved that lemon/fic. it was so ammusing and funny. I laughed all the way thought it. To start with i was a bit weary with the whole thing, but after a few moments of getting into it i loved it alot. ^^ great idea and well done.

Only one mistake, tai said he would say dare because he wanted to keep his truth, but they asked him a truth question anyway... lol other then that GREAT!

keep it up, ^^ next time make sure to add digimon in though. =P

[Tazer]

lol great!

Although... I beleive the whole 'My ass is open for business' thing was the exact same as from Lord Archive... during a T or D game as well... *shrugs* Well whatever.

[circeus]

Yup, Slumber Party, from the Red Digivice Diaries serie, if I correctly remember. Cody was definitely out of caracter, but maybe that's me. Very nice. I certainly didn't expect it to go out of hands THAT quickly *snickers*

All we need now is a version with the digimon. *drools*

[InsaneImpmon]

Only one mistake, tai said he would say dare because he wanted to keep his truth, but they asked him a truth question anyway... lol other then that GREAT!

Hmmm... I see everyone were too drunk to notice the mistake. Actually i didn't realize it so I guess I'll make a slight revision. Something along the line of Izzy daring Tai to name all the girls. That way the revision will be minimal.

Although... I beleive the whole 'My ass is open for business' thing was the exact same as from Lord Archive... during a T or D game as well... *shrugs* Well whatever.

I'll have to read that one. If it is that similiar, I'll figure out what he can do instead of that line. Coincidence or not, I'd rather not have anything too similiar.

Yup, Slumber Party, from the Red Digivice Diaries serie, if I correctly remember. Cody was definitely out of caracter, but maybe that's me. Very nice. I certainly didn't expect it to go out of hands THAT quickly *snickers*

Every drink a sake? That stuff makes common beer as strong as a cough syrup. Beside I wanted to torture Cody a bit, he was a bit too stuffed up in the series. Beside who said everyone had to be in characters?

The next part will have a single Digimon in it but not a whole much. Think of all female slumber party MSTing the orgy video Jun made. >=) There may be a little T&D at the end before they turn in for the night.

[circeus]

Think of all female slumber party MSTing the orgy video Jun made. >=) There may be a little T&D at the end before they turn in for the night.

Oh GOD! Can't wait to read that one! It's hard to beat a real good MST for laughing potential!

[Lord Archive]

Before I start, I will state your story is not plagerism of my Diaries series, but similarities being a 'coincedence' I find hard to believe.

Your story is yours, and told in your own words. However, there are too many things in this that existed in Diaries in some form or another for there to not to be some influence at some point. Red Digivice Entry 13 - Slumber Party and Entry 14 Obsession are both a few years old and were written when Tamers was new in Japan.

"It's illegal. Porn of kids 16 and under is illegal here in Japan."

"Damn! Well..." Davis thought for a bit. "Ok since you're old enough, I want you to go to the patio, bare your butt and yell at the top of your voice 'My ass is open for business'"

Izzy glared but obliged as he got up and walked to the patio door, slid it open and stepped out in the balcony. He proceeded to pull his pants down and stuck his ass out and then yelled "Davis' ass is open for business!"

"Hey I didn't say that!" Davis cried.

"Ah but you did. You said, and I quite 'my ass' so I interpreted your order referring to your ass." Izzy said with a smirk before sitting down and taking a sip of sake. After he sat the bottle down, he drew another name. "Davis, what do you want?"

"Dare"

"Ok. Can I get back to you later?" Izzy asked. "I can't think of something yet.

Davis sighed "Ok." He was actually relieved that he wouldn't do something nasty just yet.

TK squeaked "My turn!" He stopped as he swallowed hard. "Sorry" he said in normal voice. "Must be the drink." When he drew the name, he said "Tai again?"

Tai groaned loudly, it seems everyone was picking him a lot. "I'll take dare since I used truth with Matt."

"Just a sec" TK said as he got up and stepped through the group, his naked dick bouncing around a bit. When he returned from the kitchen, he handed Tai a banana. "It's obvious my brother fancies you. Better start getting used to backdoor sex." He said with a grin. "Shove it as deep as you can.

Cody gulped hard, he's never heard of backdoor sex but it sounded bad. He and everyone watched as Tai shifted position so he was on his knees and his ass high in the air. With some effort, he managed to work the banana right at the anus. He tried as hard as he could but had trouble getting it going as the banana was dry. Cody's eyes widened as he saw that.

First, the legal minimum age to have nude pictures made of someone in Japan is eighteen.

I mentioned in RDD Entry 13, Slumber Party, the age to buy it at fifteen and Sora purchased it stating she was sixteen.


Second, 'my ass is open for business' here's the direct quote from my fict (Musume, Yukimi, and Dachi are Hikari's childhood friends.)

Musume nodded. "Um, go out on the balcony and scream as loud as you can, 'my ass is open for business.'"

The room crashed to the floor in mass face-fault.

"Just getting into the game," Musume nervously giggled.

"All right." Yukimi got up and went to the balcony. "MUSUME'S ASS IS OPEN FOR BUSINESS!" She walked back in with a smirk.

"I didn't tell you say THAT." Musume blushed fiercely.

"You said 'my ass,' so I interpreted as being your ass." Yukimi tried to look innocent but failed. "Was I wrong?"

"Very," Miyako quipped. "Dachi?"


Also, I'm surprised no one mentioned the bananas:

Yukimi grinned. "Mimi, I dare you to give that lizard a blow job."

V-mon stared. "Say wha?!"

Mimi's eyes widened in shock. "What?! I can't!"

Yukimi folded her arms. "Would Jyou consider being with a digimon a threat to your relationship, especially if part of a game?"

"After how many times I've been hit on, he might," Mimi retorted.

"Would you rather fuck and anal bananas?" Yukimi asked.

Mimi paused. "The bananas."


Other points of similarity with Diaries, including entry 14:

Opening and closing with a diary entry.
Yamato is gay.
Iori brought prune juice for himself while Yamato brought beer and sake for everyone else at an all male party (Takeru's bachelor party).
Koushiro downloading porn.
Jun crashing the party.
Two people of the same sex having sex, masturbation, and bringing in someone of opposite sex for orgy.

[InsaneImpmon]

Hmmm... maybe I did read your fanfic and forgot about it? :oops: You did say your fanfic is from when Tamer was new, and that was almost 2 years ago. Oh well, for most part it's more original than a rip off.

I do know it's common theme to declare Matt gay and it had been like that in so many fanfics and mangas that any lemon with Matt as being straight would be original. And Jun never got involved in the orgy, she only had Matt.

I'll still change the ass business anyway as it's so close it's like a direct copy from your fanfic, it was the first one someone noticed as being similiar to yours.

Also I'm about half way through the second part and there will be a T&D in it. Here's a short nd condensed snippet from the next part of the lemon:

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"OK Kari, ready for your dare?" Yolei asked. She pulled out a strange device. "This is the WMO!"

"WMO?" Kari asked.

"Weapon of Mass Orgasm. The ultimate vibrator."

Kari took a look at the battery control. On it was a dial with the setting from setting one, 'Kid's stuff' to ten, 'The Finger of God'.

[milk me!]

I'm not even going to get into the debate of whether or not this story borrowed this or that from another fic or not. I enjoyed it. Very fun. The slumber party/truth or dare fic has been done to death but you're a really good writer and you kept it funny from beginning to end.

"Great, I think the banana broke inside my ass."

If it's a hot lemon, I'm usually too into it to laugh at anything, but this line made me laugh out loud. I don't know why.

Hehe, I'll have to try that.

[The Infamous Boss Reo]

::reads lemon::

::gets incredibly aroused::

Shazam o.o

Very nice, is all i can really say. That, and it's quite the shibbiness. Shibby all around, yo. I rarely play out scenes from fanfics in my head when i jerk off, but this one certainly was one of the few exceptions >;3

Muy spectacular lemon, boowie.