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Revialisa Chronicals Ch1: A Rose in the Flower Garden (Needs a Review)
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Ok... I know I haven't been... around in a while, lots of real life issues issues at the moment regarding moving out not once but twice and currently internet-less once more, but I do have the first half of the story checked and cleared.

http://darkknightmatt.deviantart.com/#/d4ntttq (Part 1 of 2)

I'll post up the next one once it's cleared. I'll admit this is a lot better than it was originally written but I would love any and all comments and criticism either here or on the DeviantArt page. Any is greatly appreciated and honesty grants even more points lol.
Nyaa... Will be around but not very much.
The OCA
Veemon's Followers
Renamon's Army
Shadow Dragon Pack (SDP)
Creative Minds
Lady Devimon's Minions
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