08-03-2013, 09:43 PM
OC: try to mention your charectures name more often as if speaking in the third person narateing her actions. i keep haveing to refrence to page 1 to remember her name
IC:
garret creeps forward little by little. the centaurs disstraction allowing him to progress with ease.
IC:
garret creeps forward little by little. the centaurs disstraction allowing him to progress with ease.
i have seen the very darkness of humanity that we destroy are selfs in the end but i have also seen our potential for good and freindship and that is what i hang on too, I am unrelenting and i fight for what i belive in that is my goal.
I AM ACEJT AND I WILL REBEL
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I AM ACEJT AND I WILL REBEL
click here to see my original fiction turn RP