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The Data Trap
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I've been putting this on AFF.net for a while and would like to see what this community has to add.
Please I need feedback.

The data trap
Chapter 1, an accidental partner.

This story is based partially on the ideas of a well known erotic author, since said Author does not approve of the use of his universe for the purposes of this kind of material certain details were changed.

“Hey Ken what’s this?” asked Tai picking up a battered looking CD from a box in Ken’s room.
The ichijoujis were moving and Ken was in the process of getting rid of things he didn’t need, it would have been a yard sale, if the ichijouji’s had a yard.
Davis had already scored a great deal of old soccer merchandise and after Kari mentioned it Tai wanted to see if he could snag a video game or something before Izzy arrived.
He had just finished picking up most of ken’s old RPGs for a decent price when he’d found the disc, it wasn’t even labelled but Tai was curious.
Ken looked at the disk blankly for a second and then shrugged.
“It came in the mail a few months ago, some promotion for being the poster boy for donkey madness, I never tried it though and I don’t really have time for games now, you want it?”
“Yeah I’ll give it a try?” said Tai with a shrug “How much?”
“Take it, its not like I’ve got time for games at the moment.” Said Ken with a dismissive wave “Anyway you’ve bought out my old library and these things were really part of the old Ken so let me give you that mystery CD as a gift between friends.”
Tai nodded, free game, may be a demo to something not available
Handing over the money for his other purchases Tai began to head home, on his way out he passed Yolei and Kari.
”I’ll see you later sis, try not to stay out too late,” he admonished in his typical big brother voice.
“I won’t Tai, Yolei and I were just going to drop by her store and then I’ll be on my way,” Said Kari innocently.
Tai nodded giving Yolei a nod of acknowledgement, the girl was dressed in her a small spaghetti strapped number and Tai had to admit she looked good in it. Yolei wasn’t his type, and at the moment quite spoken for with Ken but Tai had to acknowledge that the brash young digidestined was really blossoming and clearly taking fashion advice from Mimi.
Shaking his head at the thought that he was checking out Yolei, Tai headed down the stairs and towards the train station.
Half an hour later, the world changed for Tai Kamiya.

Half an hour was about how long it took to take the train across town back to his family’s own apartment in Highton View Terrace. Deciding to try the mystery game first Tai shoved the blank disc into the CD drive and waited for Windows to load it up. After a few seconds an installation window appeared.
“Welcome to mind changer 3 the ultimate erotic mind control experience.”
Tai smiled, he’d secretly been hoping it was some kind of porn game, even though this was a shared computer, Tai knew that he could blame Ken if his mother bothered to look. Clicking on the install button Tai watched as the little progress bar began to tick inexorably forward.
As it did Tai saw a flurry of interesting graphics mostly of little sim people jumping around the borders, this could be worth a laugh at least.
The window jingled a complete tone and Tai opted to let the game run.
Immediately a small Logo appeared for a software company he’d never heard of followed by a short instrumental roll.
Tai sighed, this was just a cunningly hidden visual novel wasn’t it?
To his surprise the next graphic was of a dark haired beauty leaning on a start up screen. Below her ample cleavage were 5 buttons; Tutorial, Start Simulation, Load Simulation, Artefact design and quit.
Always game to learn how to play Tai clicked “tutorial”
The screen went black for a second before the window popped up
“For this tutorial a subject shall be selected from local photos.” Said the window.
Tai felt slightly nervous now, he was a good guy and he certainly didn’t want porn of his mom but before he could do anything the window disappeared, replaced by photos of Kari, his mom, his dad and to his surprise Yolei.
“Select Target” requested the window.
Unsure but driven partially by a desire to see what would happen Tai clicked Yolei’s photo.
Almost immediately Tai noticed that three separate windows appeared, one was a wireframe image of Yolei set next to a bunch of sliders, next was a window with a whole bunch of writing Tai was too lazy to read, finally there was a little window showing a cute chibi sprite of Yolei in some kind of grocery store.
“Weird game,” thought Tai as the window focus shifted to the Text window.
“Activating Demo mode,” said the window “Subject and user shall be modified temporarily to suit demo program.”
Tai felt really nervous now, he knew enough about digimon to realise all too late that this could be a trap, but before he could do anything, his mind became relaxed, as did his body.
Tai knew he should be panicking yet for some reason all he could do was watch the screen as the computer brought up a second wire frame, one of his own body.
“Altering body for ideal performance” said the window.
Tai watched with relaxed eyes as the computer moved and clicked the sliders on the wireframe window without his help.
The first slider it clicked on his shoulders and slid them to give Tai more definition, while he was athletic Tai was built for speed, the program was merely accentuating his muscles, Tai gasped as he felt the definition transfer onto his body.
Since he was in pretty good shape most of the sliders remain untouched but Tai noticed in surprise that the Penis size slider was moving.
Tai knew he wasn’t the biggest in the pants department but he was amazed and impressed as the slider slid up to max.
Tai blushed slightly as he watched the changes apply his penis expanded and lengthened into a 10 inch monster, it was also more sensitive as Tai felt the need to wank grow exponentially as his penis began to settle.
“I can’t resist it, guess I’ll make the most of it,” he thought taking his hand and grasping his new oversized member.
His eyes rolled into the back of his head as he touched his junk and was overcome by sensation.
He was so entranced in his own masturbation he failed to notice that his own window was now closed and replaced with the window of Yolei.
“Body modification commencing,” said the window.

Yolei felt a strange nausea in the pit of her stomach a peculiar compulsion to do something odd.
“I want to go to the Kamiya house,” she thought.
She tried to suppress the compulsion, but the more she resisted the more it seemed to become essential that she do it. Even though she knew that Kari was busy studying with her two would-be boyfriends she still wanted to go to the Kamiya apartment.
After five minutes of to-ing and fro-ing Yolei finally gave in and abandoned her position behind the counter. Locking the store's doors behind her she began to brusquely walk in the direction of the train station.

Coming down from the greatest orgasm of his life Tai Kamiya put his attention back on screen observing that his own window was no longer the one in focus he gave a seemingly impassive look. At the chibi picture of Yolei walking up the street, if he had been thinking normally Tai would have noticed and been horrified by this development, However fresh from the massive increase in his libido that the demo had started on all he could see now was that his chosen partner for the next stage of the evenings activity would be there in 20 minutes. Tai smiled that gave him just enough time to take a shower and make sure that everything was ready for a truly memorable experience, it wasn't every day he thought to himself, that someone loses their virginity.

Every step Yolei took towards her final destination seemed to give her more incentive to hurry, but had been a mildly vague desire simply to go to the place had become a focused desire on a single person, Tai, Yolei had never thought of her best friend’s older brother as anything other than another member of the team, but as she approached the apartment complex her devotion to him had grown nearly slavish. He wasn't just Tai any more, he was Tai her perfect man, everything she'd thought before about Ken, even the occasional passive thought about Davis was quickly giving way to an animalistic desire to throw herself at Tai and let him have his wicked way with her.
Legs crossed to contain the moisture she hit the door buzzer for the Kamiya apartment and was immediately greeted by his heavenly voice.
“Hello?” asked Tai even though he knew exactly who was coming.
“Tai it's Yolei, can you let me in?” asked the 14-year-old girl softly she was normally so forceful that now she felt submissive in the extreme.
“Sure Yolei I’ll buzz you in right away,” replied the older digidestined with a strange confidence that would have raised some kind of alert in anyone else but for the desperately horny Yolei was the kind of honey she needed to motivate the next session of actions.

Tai had been busy in the last 20 minutes, first he had made sure that he wouldn't be disturbed, now that he knew what to do and the programme had sufficiently modified his morals he felt no guilt in letting the program organise that Kari spend the night in the guest room of the Takaishis, Davis and TK now had instructions in their profiles not to try anything that could be construed as sexual that evening. Tai smiled it had even sent his parents to a restaurant followed by an evening at a love hotel instead of compelling them to come home. He was all alone with his first conquest.
Perhaps later, when he mastered it, he would simply make them ignore whatever he did with the programme but for the moment it was better for them simply not to be there.
He had just changed into a loose fitting pair of shorts and a T-shirt when Yolei had hit the doorbell.
Buzzing Yolei in was no effort but Tai wondered briefly how to play this, would he have to be subtle or would this be wild and unpredictable?
The computer was continuing to make changes a quick glance revealed Yolei’s sexual desire was through the roof. He gave a crocodile smile, he knew how this would go in his pants his cock began to tent again.

Yolei was a frazzled mess as she entered the final stretch to the Kamiya apartment. Her mind was no longer debating if this was right or wrong, the need was overriding everything. No her mind was focussed on how best to seduce him.
When she knocked on the door and he opened it she just gave into her animal instincts. Leaping like a predatory animal Yolei forced her lips onto Tai’s and was rewarded by his glorious tongue entering her mouth.
Completely consumed by her lust Yolei barely noticed as Tai ripped away her spaghetti strap and bra in a motion of near superhuman strength revealing her small but pert breasts.
Tai greedily licked his lips filling his mouth with Yolei’s small pointed nipple, the uncontrolled carnality of the situation and Yolei’s unbridled passion were huge turn on. There was a small part of his wondering what Yolei would wear on he way out as their intense foreplay was quickly shredding his first partner’s clothing into rags.
Yolei was also doing her fair share of ripping, she gasped as Tai began to suck her nipples, then continued her own sojourn kissing his neck with increasing desire. She began to grind her sensitive body against Tai’s muscular form, she gasped as she felt his body tense and his massive hardon poking through the shorts.

After ten minutes of this kind of aggressive foreplay Tai decided it was time to introduce Yolei to his improved equipment, removing his mouth from Yolei’s breast he pulled down his pants airing his new member for Yolei’s pleasure.
Yolei gasped, she’d been imagining Tai’s cock since her desires had flamed up but it was bigger than she ever imagined, it actually made her cool down and hesitate for a while. Grasping the massive member in her hand barely able to hold it, she tentatively put her tongue out and licked it once.
Tai groaned in pleasure Yolei was taking things slowly and that actually made it better, her first tentative licks and running her hand up and down his shaft were becoming a constant fluid motion, Tai nearly came straight off the bat when Yolei, her confidence restored finally put his monster into her mouth.
Yolei’s confidence wasn’t the only thing restored, as she started to bob her head up and down the shaft she found that her mouth perfectly adapted to accommodate his size, it should have just been for his pleasure but Yolei felt herself growing more and more stimulated the more of his cock entered her mouth. she felt amazingly full when after some effort Tai began to push beyond her gag reflex and enter her throat. Allowing her tongue to transverse what it could while she breathed through her nose Yolei felt her hand drift down and fondle her clit.
Tai huffed as his conquest and first partner grazed the base of his massive member allowed him to thrust all the way down her throat the tightness overwhelming his sense of control.
As his orgasm crashed over his pulsing body he pulled back spurting his orgasm all over her naked tits as he pulled out Yolei began to writhe covering the floor in her juices. Tai lay back as his dick pulsed like a resting dragon. Yolei her gorgeous top half now sprinkled with white flecks as she removed her skirt and dumped her drenched panties on the floor. Then rising like succubus, completely lost in her lust Yolei pushed him down thrusting her tongue into his mouth as she grasped his member with her other hand.
Guiding his member into her pussy Yolei played tonsil hockey as Tai began to stretch out her virgin tunnel turning Yolei into his personal whore.
Lowering herself until Tai reached her hymen Yolei whimpered and with a hint of strange sadness she pushed herself down.
Tai nearly lost his load right then, here he was, buried to the hilt of his massive member in a girl who he’d never thought of sexually before in his life, he had lost his virginity and now he was going to fuck Yolei senseless so senseless that she’d be his slave forever.
Struggling for breath Yolei pulled herself up and dropped onto his cock again, every time he filled her she gasped in mini orgasm.
“Let’s not be gentle Tai,” she gasped “Just fuck me!”
“All right you slut, you want to fuck? I’ll screw you senseless!” exclaimed Tai really getting into the rhythm of the sex his new developed muscles coming in handy as he picked up the gyrating teenager and pushed her hard against the living room wall. For the next couple of minutes he kept up the pace pushing her up against the wall hard as he completely let rip on yolei.
Yolei was not a quiet one either, what had started as whimpering and moaning was full on screaming Tai’s name as he sent her to heaven the hard way.
With one final thrust Tai spurted a massive gush of cum into Yolei’s vagina, completely filling the younger girl to the brim, so much so it dripped down his strained cock.

It was some time later, continuous orgasms had pretty much dominated from then on Tai producing more cum than he thought possible and using it to fill Yolei’s mouth and Pussy again and again, the girl was covered in his seed now and had a steady stream dripping out of her deflowered snatch as she slept deeply.
Tai lay back examining his handy work, he then went over to the computer and observed as the screen reverted to the busty woman mascot who now sported purple hair and glasses.
A single option grayed the screen.
“Keep changes” it read.
Tai smiled, this was just the beginning and he liked how it was going.


The rest of the story can be found here
http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600051458

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o: This reminds me of that Mind Control story... Master Program? Something like that. When added to digimon, in a fashion like this, it gives it an interesting touch.

Now what if a digimon like Veemon/Flamedramon started using it? :3
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(07-25-2011 02:29 AM)DragonMasterX Wrote: o: This reminds me of that Mind Control story... Master Program? Something like that. When added to digimon, in a fashion like this, it gives it an interesting touch.

Now what if a digimon like Veemon/Flamedramon started using it? :3

That story is one of the big influences, I just couldn't use the title because the author is against attaching it to subjects under 16, since Yolei is 13 in dub canon, I didn't want to risk direct connection.
As for Veemon, I doubt the canon one would do much, most of the partners are more moral than their humans.
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Gomamon is kind of more amoral that his partner...
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I agree, Veemon is quite innocent if you think back about his characterization, but I'd still give it a try. That's just me though.
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(07-25-2011 06:43 AM)BlackVeedramon Wrote: Gomamon is kind of more amoral that his partner...

I suppose although considering how repressed and neurotic Jou is that isn't hard and I can't see Gomamon mindfucking people outside of Red Rover's stuff, I can see someone like Guilmon doing it by accident to make people happy, but not someone as worldly wise as the "seal bro".


(07-25-2011 08:07 AM)DragonMasterX Wrote: I agree, Veemon is quite innocent if you think back about his characterization, but I'd still give it a try. That's just me though.

I suppose but as I like to imply in the story, absolute power and all that comes into play after a while. The reason I decided to use Tai is that he's a very sexually frustrated character in the series. especially 02 where his role is diminished except for the odd bit of Sorato jealousy.
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