MOOOAAARR!!! I enjoyed this very much hahaha hurry and write more!! x3
Oh and for crit now.
I was a little worried about how fast Maahes warmed up to the new character. Er, the rest of the story was great, but it went a little too fast with the two. But then again, I'm just not used to stories where the characters warm up to each other so fast.
Oh and for crit now.
I was a little worried about how fast Maahes warmed up to the new character. Er, the rest of the story was great, but it went a little too fast with the two. But then again, I'm just not used to stories where the characters warm up to each other so fast.