09-26-2009, 04:12 PM
I've actually read what he has finished on this series.. And after helping him re-work the straight and lesbian scenes, I think it's a very good story, Though I'm hoping he eventually works things around so that Kari hooks up with the female main character on a permanent basis. They're cute together.
"You are such a smartass."
"Objectively I am very smart, although it has nothing to do with my ass."
"Objectively I am very smart, although it has nothing to do with my ass."