Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

At the 32nd second on that rift, is there a way to add like a doo dah dah melody going lower? go lower instead of steadying constant will add to the punkish vibe that you have going in your song. I wish I could explain better. But for Wisemon's voice it would actually fit it perfectly. Very nice. Reminds me of a hybrid between Offspring and some SR-71.