07-17-2007, 09:20 PM
You might also want to get a paragraph structure.. make it easier to read.. Right now it looks like more of an outline than a story.
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[My First digimon Yaoi Lemon] - by Kubari - 07-08-2007, 01:31 AM
RE: [My First digimon Yaoi Lemon] - by Erethzium - 07-08-2007, 02:10 AM
RE: [My First digimon Yaoi Lemon] - by Herr Mullen - 07-08-2007, 09:11 AM
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