09-03-2006, 01:24 PM
I'm always up for some constructive critiscism to help me get better at writing; feel free to either boost the size of my E-Penis or make me cry like a little girl on my newest story so far.
[color=blue]Kajarabi was a peaceful little village, a small farming community in Western Rwanda that harvested fruits, vegetables and other food products. The residents of the village were honest, hardworking people, who tended to their crops and took care of their families from sun up
[color=blue]Kajarabi was a peaceful little village, a small farming community in Western Rwanda that harvested fruits, vegetables and other food products. The residents of the village were honest, hardworking people, who tended to their crops and took care of their families from sun up