08-10-2006, 12:12 AM
yup i finally finished my first lemon. it would be nice if someone could review it. I modified it a bit from the original things that I have thought for it. I mean... i was supposed to use also Yuki, but the only thing i did on my lemon actually was to mention her a couple of times. well anyway here it is my complete work.
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It was already midday, and the cutie two tails purple renamon is still laying down on her bed just sleeping cutely. But her sleep was about to end once she turns around on bed, facing the open window and feeling the warm of the outside light on her face. It didn
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It was already midday, and the cutie two tails purple renamon is still laying down on her bed just sleeping cutely. But her sleep was about to end once she turns around on bed, facing the open window and feeling the warm of the outside light on her face. It didn
