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New writer, any reviewer's pick...
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Hehe, yeah, the fight scene thing... I totally agree with your comments there and maybe I'll revise it when I find the time... what you described is what I was going for but I guess I didn't draw it out long enough.

The scene with Auroramon and Chris is rather sudden... but I'm actually going to play off of that fact.... at, uh, some point... soonish. :P Like you said, writing a series is hard...

Oh, and :P While Koushirou has a thing for Taichi, Tai's not gay in my series... nor are Yamato, Jyou, uh... most other people I can think of... I'm trying REALLY hard to keep myself from writing lemons for every pairing I like and putting them in the series, because most of them would just be out of place...
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New writer, any reviewer's pick... - by Enoch - 07-20-2006, 01:53 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-20-2006, 08:53 PM
[No subject] - by Enoch - 07-21-2006, 02:30 AM