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New writer, any reviewer's pick...
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Basically just read over what I have so far and let me know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong...

http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/enoch/

Apology Accepted is teh first lemon I wrote... IMO Concience has the best sex scene, but the characters in it are introduced earler in the series...

It's all yaoi, btw, so be forewarned. Or whatever. XP
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New writer, any reviewer's pick... - by Enoch - 07-20-2006, 01:53 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-20-2006, 08:53 PM
[No subject] - by Enoch - 07-21-2006, 02:30 AM