07-19-2006, 12:09 PM
I've been writing adult stories for almost two or three years and one thing I simply can't get done is putting serious passion in my sex scenes.
If you want an example of what I'm trying to achieve, go to the cartoon section of adultfanfiction.net and then go to Jackie Chan Adventures. There's this author called Spleefmistress on there and she writes the best Jade/Hsi Wu love stories I've ever read (Read some of her stories and you'll see why).
She makes the sex scenes look realistic and passionate, while mine are real choppy and hardly believable. I'd really appreciate any help you guys can offer. Thank you.
If you want an example of what I'm trying to achieve, go to the cartoon section of adultfanfiction.net and then go to Jackie Chan Adventures. There's this author called Spleefmistress on there and she writes the best Jade/Hsi Wu love stories I've ever read (Read some of her stories and you'll see why).
She makes the sex scenes look realistic and passionate, while mine are real choppy and hardly believable. I'd really appreciate any help you guys can offer. Thank you.