Destruction series reviews??

[DragonMasterX]

Sorry for the delay Big T, here's the review for the fourth chapter.

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This progress was for those who were injured badly; the liquid would help them regenerate faster

The word here is actually: "Process."

Before Veedramon could ponder this any longer, all the lights suddenly went out. Suddenly

I wouldn't use "suddenly" twice, poor characters would soon suffer heart attacks.

Immediately the four Biyomon's blinked their eyes, as they digivolved into Garudamons who flied

The verb you want to use here is: "flew", Fly is an irregular verb.

[quote]"Is it the girl that makes you not give in to your desire of power?" Silvermon questioned, leaping towards Gatomon and lifting her up from her neck.