Fesh Meat.. any reviewers pick

[Wisemon]

Psst: The winner of the June contest is an admitted virgin too. Don't think that us virgins are automatically bad at writing sex scenes.

There are a couple of ways for a virgin to write about sex. You mentioned the difference between erotic and pornographic. Here's how that shows up in a lemon:

Pornographic: Watch porn for inspiration. Don't concern yourself with the characters' motivations. They're just there to have sex. All the missteps will be edited out.

Erotic: Read romance novels and short stories for inspiration. Think about how the characters end up having sex. What are their motivations leading up to sex, and more importantly, during sex? How will the scene play out? Here's a hint: There probably won't be a second helping of sodomy.