06-28-2006, 11:48 PM
No matter how hard I attempt to create one, it never comes out right. The opening hook, the first sentence, the first paragraph, the first page, all of it so important and I'm going nuts trying to make one of my own!
The most ironic thing is that I have everything else planned out, the plot, characters, setting, background - everything, only to be denied by the blasted white screen! Oh the unescapable drama!
I'm trying to center my opening around a certain setting piece that will be the centerfold for the opening scene. It takes place in the Digimon Emperor's base, where the main character, Alistair Lorne, tries to recapture armor-digieggs used in the Engine Sanctum (Engine Sector) of Ken's base. With him is the female heroine, Caden Sario, and a contingent of 'Purgatory Troopers'. They hail from the infernoes deep inside the digital world in a soceity called 'The Foundry'. Like Gennai, these people create digi-armor digieggs for chosen children.
>This story will illuminate the adventure of Foundry Marshal Alistair Lorne and the heroic battles to recapture eggs that have been stolen from the Foundry's Gale Factorum.<
But I still need to friggin figure out how to open with such a plot like this one!
The most ironic thing is that I have everything else planned out, the plot, characters, setting, background - everything, only to be denied by the blasted white screen! Oh the unescapable drama!
I'm trying to center my opening around a certain setting piece that will be the centerfold for the opening scene. It takes place in the Digimon Emperor's base, where the main character, Alistair Lorne, tries to recapture armor-digieggs used in the Engine Sanctum (Engine Sector) of Ken's base. With him is the female heroine, Caden Sario, and a contingent of 'Purgatory Troopers'. They hail from the infernoes deep inside the digital world in a soceity called 'The Foundry'. Like Gennai, these people create digi-armor digieggs for chosen children.
>This story will illuminate the adventure of Foundry Marshal Alistair Lorne and the heroic battles to recapture eggs that have been stolen from the Foundry's Gale Factorum.<
But I still need to friggin figure out how to open with such a plot like this one!