06-25-2006, 04:29 AM
Do you have any suggestions on my first question?
In my story, after she first meets my character and shows him his dorm, just before she exits I have her pull down her pants and show off her ass (it was inspired by a picture I saw). I also have her spy on my character while he's working out and making him aware of her. Finally, in one scene, my character goes to a bar with strippers and I have Jinx be one and focus on my character. How does that sound so far?
In my story, after she first meets my character and shows him his dorm, just before she exits I have her pull down her pants and show off her ass (it was inspired by a picture I saw). I also have her spy on my character while he's working out and making him aware of her. Finally, in one scene, my character goes to a bar with strippers and I have Jinx be one and focus on my character. How does that sound so far?