06-24-2006, 10:23 AM
My attempts to make her seem like a slut are aimed not just at my character, but at the reader as well. I want the reader to believe her to be a slut and agree with my character's avoidance of her, then be as surprised as my character upon discovering she's just a love-starved girl.
Also, to add a bit more of a plot to the story, I have my character hesitate in the first sex scene just before he's about to enter her. At the moment, I have the reason being that Jinx says she loves him and he finds that he can't say the same thing because he doesn't know what love is (he had an abusive childhood, so I think it actually makes sense). Thus the rest of the story leading up to the final sex scene, which will include a battle with the Teen Titans, involves my character finding out what love is. So far, does it sound like a good story?
Also, I've seen Jinx on the Teen Titans show and she doesn't exactly strike me as someone who would just open her legs for anybody, which is what I've been led to believe is the behavior or a slut.
Also, to add a bit more of a plot to the story, I have my character hesitate in the first sex scene just before he's about to enter her. At the moment, I have the reason being that Jinx says she loves him and he finds that he can't say the same thing because he doesn't know what love is (he had an abusive childhood, so I think it actually makes sense). Thus the rest of the story leading up to the final sex scene, which will include a battle with the Teen Titans, involves my character finding out what love is. So far, does it sound like a good story?
Also, I've seen Jinx on the Teen Titans show and she doesn't exactly strike me as someone who would just open her legs for anybody, which is what I've been led to believe is the behavior or a slut.